A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is suggested that every students within a nation should have the same lesson they learn at their primary and secondary level school. This means that a student at school ABC will learn exactly the same Math with that at school XYZ. The same goes to Biology, physics, and all other subjects. Only until they enrolled at university, they will start learning particular and tailored subject to their interest. If applied, there are some advantages to this policy. However, several serious drawback need to be considered otherwise the nation's education system will be trapped in a gigantic loophole.
The main advantage of this policy is it is relatively easy for the nation to administer, monitor and control the progress of the education in each school in the country. Having a single standard will eliminate the burden of having to individually assess each school curriculum and the extent that curriculum is effectively applied. This is especially true in a country with hundreds of millions of citizen like the United States of America where hundreds of thousands of schools are exist today. A simple calculation will show that individually assessing each school will be arduous task.
Another advantage is mainly related with nation's vision of education. Once a nation have a vision to achieve in next 20 or 30 years, it has to instill and incorporate those idea to the national curriculum to be adopted by all primary and secondary education institution. It will be more effective and efficient if this idea is realized by making it compulsory for every and each single school to adopt the already prepared, and approved, curriculum. In addition this will ensure that everyone in the nation, assumed they have learned in school, understand the vision of the nation and having exactly the same ground to move forward together.
Nevertheless, there are severe implication to these policy. Requiring all students in a nation to learn the same thing will eliminate the potential of uniqueness that we are expecting to see from our children from different part of the nation. Some children might not be able to excel in the field that they are good at since they forced to leave what they like to learn what they have to learn. This will mar their motivation to learn and will deteriorate the nation's innovation in the future. Some children might also learn faster than the other students, but they cannot move faster since they still have to stick to same sets of lessons.
Yet the overarching disadvantage to this policy is that many schools, in their inability to catch up with the required standardized curriculum, might fail to survive as the government deemed them to be incapable of adhering to the standard. Some schools might have their strengths, but also their weakness; many times their weakness is related to their inability to provide teaching staff who are capable to relay the lesson within the recognized standard. It will be worse in the case of Physics or Biology where the school is required to provide a standard lab. Failing to do so might cause to the closure of the school. And when a school is closed, it is not only the teaching staff who suffer, but the community, and the whole nation.
Having considered the above advantages and disadvantages, requiring all students to learn the same curriculum will have an adverse effect. It will be wiser for the regulator to give the options for schools to either using the prepared standardized curriculum or building their own sets of learning system by paying attention to the uniqueness and the available resources of their students and schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Message: Did you mean 'this idea' or 'those ideas'?
Suggestion: this idea; those ideas
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... prepared, and approved, curriculum. In addition this will ensure that everyone in the n...
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Message: Did you mean 'this policy' or 'these policies'?
Suggestion: this policy; these policies
...heless, there are severe implication to these policy. Requiring all students in a nation to ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ation to learn and will deteriorate the nations innovation in the future. Some children...
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Message: "required standardized" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'standardizing' or 'to be standardized'.
Suggestion: standardizing; to be standardized
...inability to catch up with the required standardized curriculum, might fail to survive as th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3039.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 606.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01485148515 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96155895361 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6616235848 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443894389439 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 953.1 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4548308738 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.884615385 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88461538462 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155381252023 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539033345601 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393785327633 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982321119318 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036419416469 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.