You have been doing some voluntary work to help local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working.
In Your letter
- Describe the work you have been doing
- Explain why you can no longer do this work
- recommend another person who is interested in the work
Dear Ray,
I am writing this in reference to my the teaching activity which I am currently doing with 'Robin Hood Academy' in one of the cluster in church street as a volunteer to teach under-privileged children in the slum.
I have enjoyed working with the team at the slum however, I would not be able to continue from next week due to my upcoming final exams, next month. As I am in my last year of MBA, I need to focus on my exams and placements. I would really love to come back, post my graduation and would love to volunteer again over weekends.
I have covered fifty percent of the school syllabus for the children and leaving them in between would not be correct. Hence, I spoke to my brother 'Chahat' and he has agreed to support this noble cause for next two months.Kindly accept my apology for discontinuing in between.
Thank You for all the extended support during my volunteering tenure.
Yours sincerely
Mohit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kindly
...rt this noble cause for next two months.Kindly accept my apology for discontinuing in ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63473053892 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67359737355 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634730538922 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3254607783 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977047814954 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414456915845 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359835329338 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056345371464 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168760815799 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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