A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
academics plays an important role in students life. The nation plays a crucial role in students life by deciding what curriculum the schools has to follow.it is beneficient for both the students and the nation to have a same national curriculum.
Firstly, if all the schools in the nation follow same curriculm, it will be beneficient to students whose parents keep travelling . In such cases, even if the student goes to another school he can cope up with the studies as his new follows the same curriculm as the previous one . it also helps them to discuss different materials among different students across the nation .also it helps them to discuss with each other and choose their carrier .
Infact, now it is easier for the government to organise matters related to academics because every student are on the same page of the book (i.e have same curriculum). even if changes are made it allows them to apply on all the schools in the nation. For example if governament wishes to add a subject in the curriculum , it will be an easier task as all the schools follow the same curriculm.
On conclusion it will be a wise descion if all schools in the nation follow the same curriculm . As mentioned above it will be useful for both the government and students .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 2235.4752809 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 442.535393258 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73755656109 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58440545305 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502262443439 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 704.065955056 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.218661219 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.7 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316743004705 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139444410936 0.0831039109588 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929017117251 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214575137357 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611464972087 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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