A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer.
I agree that a nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. education is important and the developing brain is a sponge for knowledge. exposing the children of a nation to the same material not only helps create a great curriculum, but it also allows students to learn together helping each other along the way. A nation wide curriculum would aid in the faith of a younger generation in the eyes of their elders.
if only one curriculum was put into place nation wide that means more people would get to help shape it as opposed to multiple different structures. The more brains set on a task, the more polished the final result will be. Those who are taught the material might have a unique new idea on how to share a concept. teaching in the most clear and concise manner not only gives a stronger understanding, it also allows for more material to be covered. Each person views a concept in a different way, using the vast variety of input, lessons could be as effective and fun as ever. Access to the internet accelerated the growth of knowledge due to the capability to receive information and input from peers at rates never seen. Combining ideas and sharing knowledge will no doubt result in the most efficient teaching methods.
one lesson plan would make going through school a lot easier on the children for a couple reasons. one being that if a family was to move states while their child/children were in school, there would be no worry whether (for example) the math course taken would cover similar information. if it did not the student could feel dull minded or left out when really they were just taught different material. Now if the curriculum was the same not only would the student who moved be able to jump right into the lesson plan but no matter where in the nation you go each person shares a common base knowledge that could easily be the topic of a conversation.
Letting schools differ on what they teach could also effect the economy. if all schools only taught history, science, math and english etc.. but didn't delve into the trades such as culinary arts, mechanics or nursing like some programs schools offer, the niche in the type of jobs students later obtained wouldn't be diverse. So many jobs exist with some gaining more attention then others. In a solid economy we need people interested and evenly spread through fields. creating a well balanced, diverse curriculum would expose students to a variety of fields opening their minds to what all the world has to offer.
while separate and individual plans can have their benefits, this is what college for. it is best to send children off to work or future education with the same base knowledge. one they can talk with each other about, analyze their future options and chose the right path with the help of one giant group teaming up to create a perfect basic knowledge curriculum.
P.S. Time didn't allow for a proof read and real test won't have spell/grammar check so I plan to leave it as is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
...al curriculum until they enter college. education is important and the developing brain i...
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Suggestion: Exposing
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Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...her helping each other along the way. A nation wide curriculum would aid in the faith of a ...
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Suggestion: If
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
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Suggestion: Teaching
...que new idea on how to share a concept. teaching in the most clear and concise manner no...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...be covered. Each person views a concept in a different way, using the vast variety of input, lesso...
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Suggestion: If
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Line 5, column 578, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[6]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'common base knowledge'.
Suggestion: common base knowledge
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Suggestion: If
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Suggestion: didn't
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Suggestion: wouldn't
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Line 7, column 378, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
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Suggestion: than
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Suggestion: Creating
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Suggestion: While
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Suggestion: It
...eir benefits, this is what college for. it is best to send children off to work or...
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Suggestion: One
...education with the same base knowledge. one they can talk with each other about, an...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Line 11, column 64, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spelled', 'spelt'.
Suggestion: spelled; spelt
...or a proof read and real test wont have spell/grammar check so I plan to leave it as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2519.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69962686567 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4048608779 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548507462687 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 780.3 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2281299643 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.76 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.44 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.32 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249162748352 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675587025309 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115846692014 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127360244331 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129419125289 0.0667264976115 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.