A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
In every nation, where people want to give emphasize on primary stage of education. Because In this early stage , the children gather their experience for their later life. The assumption is that every student should study same curriculum until before college. It is actually too much to ask to study same book or knowledge for different type of students. Students have different capability, different interest. It is considered loss when a student have different interest like vocational study but have to study same like others.
Naturally people have different nature. Some wants to travel, some wants to make a movie or some want to be engineer. Every possible events have different start of life. For example, Student who want to be a engineer need to have better class at science, student who want to be a cricketer need to have a better physical class. If all student follow a same curriculum ,they may find other subject boring which is out of his interest. Student may not well in the class because of apathy of some subjects.So it is better to have different course of study for different type of student.
Capability of student vary. All of them have not the same capability. One who have skills at math my not have the skills in art. Furthermore, If the father of basic fundamental physics, newton have to study on arts, he may not good in arts and we may not find the genius invention from him. From Galleleo to Picaso every human born with different capability. It is very much unfair to give them same course with different capability.
It is always efficient when have a one direction. Student who will be an engineer in future, does not need to learn about politics, English or art. He may spend his most valuable time in those knowledge which he will not ever use. Different type of study may distract him from his path. So student should follow only those curriculum which he really needs. Otherwise the labor he spends for this course will be in vain. In contrast, we can say that Every student of different capability or interest needs to have basic of a knowledge. For example , A astraunaut who travels in space may need to have little knowledge on physics ,Chemistry, Math. So it is actually good thing to follow a same curriculum to give at least basic knowledge to every students.
The assumption is basically instructed to follow same primary study for every students. But providing same learning would make negative impact on students. Different Students face different criteria which will not solved by the same learning process. A blind student should have special courses than normal student. Same learning courses is fundamentally inefficient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, well, at least, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90769230769 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59745621199 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432967032967 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.742589214 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.78125 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.21875 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78125 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207144944916 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06428789561 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769761847614 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133922822239 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647384070661 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.