A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
School level is a primary level of all students. it is a basic level of the education where they have chance to know general knowledge of all the field. Indeed, young students are naive to the outside world, they have to know something little by little of the world. it can be done only if the education of general curriculm is provided to the all the students of the nation. there are mainly three reasons that nation should provide all of its student same national curriculm until they enter college.
First of all, society is the composition of the various discipline like science, mathe matices, social, economices, etc. All these area is necessary to be understood by the students if they are preparing for the adoption in the society. As, the younger students are naive and they know nothing, they should be made capable of surviving in the society until they are able to pursue something in the society. In instance, perhaps there may be student who may want to pursue his profession in the science but his knowledge in the science only not sufficient to accomplish his success. he may need the knowledge of the social science and economices to find out what is demand of the people and accordingly it, he can pursue his innovation without second thought.
Secondly, it will be absurd to impose the specific education system on the child who are unaware to do what in his future. By applying national curriculm to all student, all student have time to decide what they want to do in future and in other words they can unravel their hidden interest in some extent. if student has provided all the curriculm, he/she would be able to pursue the field which they like most in the future. if this curriculm has not provided and they are imposed in the only one field as per like their parents, thier future would have certainly led anything other than failure.
Thirdly, it helps to know the general performance of the student in a various sectors. it will be wise and productive to test the fresh mind in the different fields. it would be also beneficial to student in either physical way and mental way if they have provided different task in immature level.
In conclusion, mind of the should be tested in a various field so that their potential can be analysied and they can be directed in a productive field therwise, theu may have suffered from anxiety in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68973747017 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47077229623 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448687350835 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8310279017 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2777777778 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274572686459 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101610480299 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126155771598 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153766247718 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112596662312 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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