Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
All countries are developing to bring an economic change to the in their respective country.There have been a development of IT companies even in rural areas. Time has changed every aspect of our environment. There had been an impeding of forests, parks and animal sanctuaries around the globe.
Firstly, development of rustic areas of many parts of the world can lead to opulence of wealth. Many branches and offices have been built. These small changes leads to development as a whole part of that area. This creates employment around that area. For example, There had been development in rural parts of India. This has lead to an increase in economic conditions for the country.
Secondly, companies can have prodigious network.People around that area can live propitious lifestyle rather than coming to the metropolitan cities. This can hinder the population around major cities and can lead to comfortable life for both the categories. Development of internet can update regularly.
However, deforestation and cutting out trees is preposterous. All human beings and animals won’t survive without oxygen.Around 80% of oxygen comes from forests.Deforestation and burning can lead to impeding conditions .Recently Amazon Rainforest was burning which had an adverse effect on environment.This had become a global issue. Results of not preserving can lead to exacerbate temperatures and conditions for mankind.
In conclusion, though there are adverse effect of not preserving forests but initializing situations and studying the negative effects can minimise deleterious effects. A given pristine wilderness could essentially be exploited without any consequences at all. It is these cases where using them for economic gain is acceptable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 266.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58270676692 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21890798986 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609022556391 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.4696914216 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207736780166 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687980125018 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575872143377 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111524818053 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611085528873 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.