Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significants numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
The topics of the prompt states that if the remarkable number of people of a nation suffers from hunger and unemployment, then the government should not finance for the flourishing of arts. Arts is the combination of Philosophy, knowledge, humanity, creativity, socialism, civilization etc. generated from mind. Hunger is a demand of a living body to survive and employment is the way which creates scopes and delivers the necessary element which satisfy hunger. Since, Mind controls the body, so a good condition of mind is essential compared to the body and thus importance of arts cannot be subsided by other issues and due to this reason I mostly disagree with the mentioned topic.
The present civilization has been founded by the past civilized people. A nation inherent its culture from predecessors and this culture of each nation is unique and it bears ones identity. Sometimes arts describes and publishes these historic events in various ways like crafting on stones, printing on parchment paper and many more ways. Arts may be symbolic like sculpture or book containing knowledge which is like a black box of aircraft that stores the valuable information of the past. It tells how the past was and contains the pathway for the future. The visualization of the past through the arts helps the current generation to realize the good deeds and wrong of their ancestors and thus helps the existing living beings to modify their activity in order to attain sustainability.
Arts can act as an initiator of the science and the ornaments to enjoy the beauty of the science. There are various elements in our daily life including crockeries like the tea cup to the most sophisticated technological equipment mobile which become artistic by the touch of arts. Besides, we could consider another example, the most lucrative high rise structures in the world are designed to make it magnificent and meaning fool. The creator, in other word the architects of these exceptional work have an innovative minds as well as artistic imagination feelings and capabilities which could satisfy the thirst of beauty of numerous amounts of minds. So, this the art who influence at first to imagine and later the science who make it possible.
Art may play the role of evidence preserver of time. For, example when a nation is ruled by a dictator and people of the country are abused by the autocrat the artist plays the courageous role. They oppose the illegal activities of the ruler and initiate the flake of confrontment by their most effective weapon than deadly weapon that is art and these act as a catalyst for the revolution and kept as a source of inspiration to the descendent. This work of art transmit from generation to generation to meet up the demand of time.
Sufficient but not over amount of food is required to satisfy hunger to keep mind and body alive and active. Unemployment leads to poverty and the consequence of this is reduction of the capability of managing one of the basic needs food to satisfy hunger. Food supplies the indispensable nutrient for the living bodies to survive and fit for doing work. The lack of sufficient and proper amount and type of food may lead to weak and inspiration less nation.
The topic emphasizes on the creation of scope and investment for employment and ensuring the food for the majority people and not to pay attention on lifeless things like arts. The sprit and demand of life may not be satisfied every time by good food and lucrative and luxurious elements because repetition of same things may lead to a boring life and the civilization could be stagnated. Contrary, a mind delighted through the aesthetic of arts can enjoy the meaning of life and contribute for the development of the society as well as civilization. Moreover, providing fund for food may lead people dependent on state and make them burden and also making proper plan and strategy may be effective and realistic rather than funding for creation of employment sector. The history and record tells that the importance of art cannot be shaded by any issue.
- Students should always question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively 66
- College and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester styding in a foreign country 66
- Government officials should rely on their own judgement rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve 66
- Government officials should rely on their own judgement rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve 66
- Nation should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e of each nation is unique and it bears ones identity. Sometimes arts describes and ...
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Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mind'?
Suggestion: mind
...ese exceptional work have an innovative minds as well as artistic imagination feeling...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'generation to'.
Suggestion: generation to
...cendent. This work of art transmit from generation to generation to meet up the demand of time. Sufficie...
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Line 11, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...attention on lifeless things like arts. The sprit and demand of life may not be sat...
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Line 11, column 820, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and record tells that the importance of art cannot be shaded by any issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 42.0 14.8657303371 283% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 101.0 58.6224719101 172% => OK
Nominalization: 41.0 12.9106741573 318% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3407.0 2235.4752809 152% => OK
No of words: 690.0 442.535393258 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93768115942 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.12521717326 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74492332767 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 339.0 215.323595506 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491304347826 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1076.4 704.065955056 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5936245837 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.482758621 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7931034483 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68965517241 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192419140388 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464134970995 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425456522272 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938326183673 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376076865581 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 173.0 100.480337079 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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