In order for any work of art — for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song — to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
As the famous phrase says, “ Art is subjective”, to create a piece of art which is applauded by everyone is a great feat to achieve as not every individual possesses the same taste in art. The prompt suggests that in order for any art to have merit it must be understandable to most people. I strongly agree to this suggestion due to two main reasons.
Firstly, one must understand the history and culture behind any piece of art to acknowledge its beauty and its value. For example, a said art piece in an art gallery costs a fortune, a person with no knowledge about the history behind the creation of that art would simply disregard its worth and smear on it for having such a huge tag on it,whereas only an individual with vast knowledge will be able to adore that piece of art and justify its value.
Further, if one cant relate themselves with the art or if the art is comprehendible only to a selective few,it simply wouldn’t be successful,this is mainly true for commercial art. For example, a movie called Inception was stated by IMDB to have one of the most complex plotline, if one can unfold it,that’s when it shines the most, but unfortunately not many were able to deduce the plot and made it an incomprehensible movie and hence lead it to become a flop.
Finally, there could be an argument saying, that a person need to explore various art forms to widen his or her horizon or to gain new knowledge. However, it is not possible for any artform to be amusing at get go, it might take some time to develop the taste for it and this process could take months or years which might make the person disregard it. Hence, wI would say that for any art form to be successful or hold merit it must be lucid to most people, else, it would just be a medium of entertainment only for selected few.
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- In order for any work of art for example a film a novel a poem or a song to have merit it must be understandable to most people 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46546546547 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66176198575 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537537537538 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9001925543 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.7 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3 23.4991977007 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34606357936 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161564880549 0.0831039109588 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143828491362 0.0758088955206 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226185120636 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544342595955 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.