People most respect the powerful not when they exercise their power, but when they refrain from exercising it

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...ability to vehemently influence a change either by force or free-will. Some would...
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... to vehemently influence a change either by force or free-will. Some would argue...
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...ill. Some would argue that people mostly respect the powerful when they exercise ...
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...they exercise their power on their lower subjects. But others would state that re...
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...ercise their power on their lower subjects. But others would state that respect fo...
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...state that respect for a powerful person comes when they refrain from exercising ...
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...hat respect for a powerful person comes when they refrain from exercising it. A...
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...s when they refrain from exercising it. After carefully weighing the evidence i...
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...rcising it. After carefully weighing the evidence it is clear that exercising pow...
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...nce it is clear that exercising power by powerful makes people to accord th...
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...ising power by powerful makes people to accord them the most respect. leaders an...
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...ower by powerful makes people to accord them the most respect. leaders and rule...
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... to accord them the most respect. leaders and rulers that limit their power ...
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...eaders and rulers that limit their power have been known to be challenged more in...
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...and rulers that limit their power have been known to be challenged more in rul...
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...ng it softly in exercising power find it bouncing back in a more severely manner ...
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...ely manner stating that power is more to impose.During the era of apartheid in So...
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...ner stating that power is more to impose.During the era of apartheid in South-Af...
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...ting that power is more to impose.During the era of apartheid in South-Africa, N...
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...partheid in South-Africa, Nelson mandela initially sort for a more dynamic and mo...
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...amic and more peaceful conversation with the white rulers. Even at this, he lead ...
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...d more peaceful conversation with the white rulers. Even at this, he lead onl...
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... the white rulers. Even at this, he lead only peace protest to claim it p...
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...rulers. Even at this, he lead only peace protest to claim it power. Though ...
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... he lead only peace protest to claim it power. Though he was respected but his f...
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...d only peace protest to claim it power. Though he was respected but his fight ...
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...but his fight never materialized in time as he was eventually jailed for miscondu...
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...or misconducts.similarly, phylantropists like Rockefeller, and bill gates are wel...
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... are well known for humanly kind gesture to helping people. people give respect t...
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...ll known for humanly kind gesture to helping people. people give respect to ...
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...y kind gesture to helping people. people give respect to them forgeting that it...
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...ping people. people give respect to them forgeting that it still remains wi...
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...respect to them forgeting that it still remains within power to show love to oth...
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... to them forgeting that it still remains within power to show love to others. Ho...
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... love to others. However, lower subjects failed to realize that exercising power ...
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...ising power lead these philantropists to giving back before they decide on refrai...
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...ower lead these philantropists to giving back before they decide on refraining f...
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.... Aldof hitler is one of the most feared ruler in history, with his role during w...
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... hitler is one of the most feared ruler in history, with his role during world ...
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...ry, with his role during world war two. nations and other world leaders feared th...
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... during world war two. nations and other world leaders feared the cruelty of his ...
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...y of his actions against human kind from the massive killings of jews to attackin...
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...s actions against human kind from the massive killings of jews to attacking c...
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...attacking countries. These actions alone were enough for people to develop so muc...
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...p so much respect for his reign and also for the nazis rule of great Germany. No ...
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...ch respect for his reign and also for the nazis rule of great Germany. No one...
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...many. No one ever against the nazis rule and men and women were trained to be com...
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...o one ever against the nazis rule and men and women were trained to be combac...
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...led his uncle and other top officials in the North Koreas Military for involving ...
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...involving in a failed coup. This created fear not only amidst the nationals of th...
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...ationals of the country but other people around the world. This accorded Kim so m...
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...s of the country but other people around the world. This accorded Kim so much re...
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...ed Kim so much respect, even it was bore out of fear of prosecution. Similarly, t...
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...so much respect, even it was bore out of fear of prosecution. Similarly, the ...
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.... Similarly, the mighty military nuclear weapons displayed during the countrys na...
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...ountrys national independence brought so much contention and panick from countrie...
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... national independence brought so much contention and panick from countries ar...
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...m countries around the world. This ruler is of the opinion that showing the world...
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...wing the world his arsenal was enough to accord him respect which eventually mate...
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...e world his arsenal was enough to accord him respect which eventually materializ...
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...ear that power mostly preceeds respect. from the illustrations of the influenc...
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... power mostly preceeds respect. from the illustrations of the influence of Adolf ...
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...of Adolf hitler to Kim Jong hun provided critical insights to the ripple effect o...
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... effect of making stands and decision in the quickest and most severe manner.If a...
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... of making stands and decision in the quickest and most severe manner.If anyt...
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... the quickest and most severe manner.If anything, refraining from exercis...
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...vere manner.If anything, refraining from exercisng power deviates from the true e...
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...m the true essence of being a leader and interpreted as weakness in the part of t...
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...rue essence of being a leader and interpreted as weakness in the part of the ruler. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, still, well, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2673.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60377358491 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66488607932 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542976939203 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8265713405 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6818181818 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95454545455 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 42.0 4.97078651685 845% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 70.0 7.80617977528 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418203395526 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126249219417 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159953784482 0.0758088955206 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871133745832 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131700007249 0.0667264976115 197% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.