As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of human to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Does resorting to technology to solve our every day problem really worsen our own ability to solve the problem? In my point of view, relaying on technology to encounter our everyday problem will increase our ability to solve the problem with unprecedented efficiency instead of worsening our ability to solve the problem. Given the pace of the development of human civilization after the advent of technology, we have seen our civilization advancing in a good pace because the technology has, actually, been helping us to think in a different ways than ever before.
First, technology has helped us boost up our efficiency and has made it possible for us to think of innovative way of solving our everyday problems. For example, with the advent of computer, our offices, homes and our workplaces have become more organized and easy to handle which in turn has helped us to think different ways of office management such as keeping record of our every day work in more systematic and easy way. If we had not had such technology, we would not have devised such effective ways of record keepings.
Moreover, It is the technology that has been leading us to a new level of human thinking,which otherwise would be impossible for us to think; we have diverted our mind towards space exploration with the help of technology that such concepts were beyond our imagination until few years back. Scientist have been able to send rocket to Mars due to aerospace technology which has given rise to the concepts of terraforming Mars. In this way, reliance on technology to solve problem has actually facilitated our thinking by increasing our competitiveness and by allowing more time for us to think for ourselves.
Admittedly, sometimes, over reliance on technology has made us reluctant to think of the problem we are facing. By way of example, reliance on calculator to do everyday mathematical calculation has diverted us from using our own brain, but it does not mean that our thinking ability is deteriorating; in fact, it is giving more time for us to think other creative ideas by refraining us from tedious calculation.
In conclusion, even if the reliance on technology to solve our problem sometimes makes us less reluctant to use our own brain; however, in general, it is actually helping us think about new ideas and hence helping us in more creative way than ever before.
- Government should offer free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition. 54
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field. 50
- Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall stu 61
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 544, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...been helping us to think in a different ways than ever before. First, technology ha...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ding us to a new level of human thinking,which otherwise would be impossible for us to...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93516209476 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88895397365 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453865336658 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8487995724 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.916666667 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4166666667 23.4991977007 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.21951772744 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22013344513 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105692551655 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580187886614 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146330856868 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284234394066 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 14.1392134831 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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