As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Yes, This is the world of technology. Everyday comes the new technology. people creates the new Idea every time. That turn into the technology. technology makes works better and faster. technology makes every impossible things to possible.
technology is one of the common things and needs for nowadays. technology is the human creation. people do the lots of brainstorming foe creating the new things. technology can change worlds to better to worst. like we can use our telephone to talk people who can live far,we can do the video chat , we can see them.
technology is one of the best part of humans life. technology makes the life easier. we can travel any place we want, we get information about all over the world in one place. like we can use the satellite to get information about what happened to tha place, etc.
human creates the technology for their easier lifestyle, and technology provides the all the facilities too. nowadays technology like a basic need for human.human can't thinks their lifestyle without technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: People
...ogy. Everyday comes the new technology. people creates the new Idea every time. That t...
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Suggestion: Technology
...ry time. That turn into the technology. technology makes works better and faster. technolo...
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Suggestion: Technology
...chnology makes works better and faster. technology makes every impossible things to possib...
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Suggestion: Technology
... every impossible things to possible. technology is one of the common things and needs f...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... every impossible things to possible. technology is one of the common things and needs f...
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Suggestion: Technology
...e common things and needs for nowadays. technology is the human creation. people do the lo...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e common things and needs for nowadays. technology is the human creation. people do the lo...
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Suggestion: People
...days. technology is the human creation. people do the lots of brainstorming foe creati...
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Suggestion: Technology
...instorming foe creating the new things. technology can change worlds to better to worst. l...
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Suggestion: Like
...y can change worlds to better to worst. like we can use our telephone to talk people...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...elephone to talk people who can live far,we can do the video chat , we can see them...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ho can live far,we can do the video chat , we can see them. technology is one...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n do the video chat , we can see them. technology is one of the best part of hu...
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Suggestion: Technology
... the video chat , we can see them. technology is one of the best part of humans life....
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Suggestion: Technology
...is one of the best part of humans life. technology makes the life easier. we can travel an...
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Suggestion: We
...life. technology makes the life easier. we can travel any place we want, we get in...
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Suggestion: Like
... about all over the world in one place. like we can use the satellite to get informa...
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Suggestion: Nowadays
...gy provides the all the facilities too. nowadays technology like a basic need for human....
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ology like a basic need for human.human cant thinks their lifestyle without technolo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 58.6224719101 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 2235.4752809 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 442.535393258 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00578034682 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.55969084622 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71349587237 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 215.323595506 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 704.065955056 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 23.0359550562 43% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9154770824 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.9411764706 118.986275619 43% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.1764705882 23.4991977007 43% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.117647058824 5.21951772744 2% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104323665991 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431054998817 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407406711087 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715704989813 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043095408795 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.3 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 100.480337079 30% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 11.2143820225 54% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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