As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the past decade, the rapid growth in technology has revolutionized the way humans function on a daily basis. The advance in technology has simplified many convoluted tasks for human. The technological inventions that make human life simpler are so easy to access and use, that it has become a quotidian affair to depend heavily on it to solve their daily life problems. The prompt suggests that this dependability on technology to solve problems will deteriorate the ability of humans to think on their own when faced with adversity. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with this suggestion and argue that technology is a boon, that resolves many difficult issues and it's up to the humans of how we make the best use of it for three reasons.
To begin with, there are many new world-changing innovations occurring across the globe, because of the availability of any kind of information at a click of a button to anybody with interest in acquiring it. Technology has made the world a global village for information. It connects people with similar interests to develop on their ideas. Thus, with the use of technology people can broaden their thinking process and learn about new angles possible to it from experts around the world. For instance, if a person with the idea to develop an application to protect the endangered Rhino in the Amazon forest needs funding, they could post their idea on any public platform and he or she will receive help from people around the globe who are fighting for the same cause. They might get more than funding, they will also find people who can improve upon on their original idea and expand it. Consequently, the quality of the developed product will be much higher because of the coalition of unique thinking of many individuals. The above example illustrates that use of technology can enhance the thinking of process of not just one individual but many individuals with similar interests.
Further, the use of technology reduces the time human spends on trivial mundane tasks, thus giving him or her more space to focus on the important things. For instance, home automation has automated the daily chores of human life like cleaning, washing etc., which can now be done in just minutes by operating few buttons on a machine which would otherwise take hours to complete it. Doing these routine tasks will in no way improve the cognitive abilities of human, will it? Thus, with this additional time, human can focus more on the portentous topics that can benefit him and the society.
However, the case of obesity and poverty has increased in the last decade along with the advance in technology.
Some Humans have used the technology to simplify their daily lives and with the additional time they get, they have been torpor about it. For example, research says that with increase in fast food chains and the food delivery applications, the number of people who cook freshly at home has declined. The most ordered food is junk and unhealthy. Humans have compromised their health with easy access to cooked food. Another example is the reduced mathematical thinking amongst the adults today. Even to do a simple multiplication calculation they rely on the calculator to be doubly sure of the results rather than trusting their thinking ability. These examples show that in few cases technology has decreased the human ability to think on their own.
Every individual is unique and the thinking process of humans varies vastly across the continents. The perspective of each human is very different on a same topic. Thus, this issue regarding technology deteriorating the human thinking ability is complex and varies from individual to individual and cannot be generalized. There will be few humans who will make the best use of what technology has to offer and improve their quality of life and other humans who use it as an excuse to laze around. Hopefully, humans go for the former approach and use the technology to expand their thinking ability.
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- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasonin 66
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasonin 66
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasonin 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, regarding, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 106.0 58.6224719101 181% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3335.0 2235.4752809 149% => OK
No of words: 673.0 442.535393258 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95542347697 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09335287823 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65051571123 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 324.0 215.323595506 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481426448737 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 1081.8 704.065955056 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4510381495 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4333333333 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257856490747 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730736528879 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381835532141 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133382384161 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526523600791 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 100.480337079 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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