As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the current era of the highly development of society and technology advancements, some simple and repetitive activities have been gradually done by technological machines superseding human labor and even high-end artificial intelligence has been penetrating into people's lives,as a result of which people are immersed in the convenience of technology while they also rely more on it to solve problems. Indeed, the ability of thinking would be undermined if people are excessively dependant on technology.But technology provides a shortcut to solve problems in every aspect of life.Furthermore,in spite of the appearance of more and more advanced machines, people are still able to think cleverly and effectively.
First of all,technology really helps people a lot,including relieve the burden of thinking.For example,in the past scientific research environment, complex operations often troubled the staff and could not get accurate data even though spared all efforts.In this case, electronic calculators that can help people complete complex computing and promote the development of mathematics and related fields was invented. Not only that, computers,which can be applied in almost all fields, has become an important tool for people to think and solve problems. Therefore, technology makes people's research field greatly expanded, while expanding the intellect and perception.
I have to admit,technology does cause a decline in our ability to think independently in many cases. For instance, people rely on calculators to complete simple calculation,the computing power decreases. Convenient technology causes people to be lazy in thinking, and accustomed to help through technical means.For example, many people look at the computer all day, repeating typing reply in the same way without thinking.Moreover,communication technology development causes rapid communication form, communication ability decreases.
Most importantly,with the development of science and technology, we start to think about more sophisticated problems that we had not considered before.Take the cognition of the universe as an example, technology has laid the foundation for testing the theory of the universe.When it comes to the center of the universe, from the geocentric theory to the heliocentric theory, and later scientists challenge the previous theory in order to establish a new one step by step.Human’s cognitive level gradually expands with the development of technology, close to the truth. In addition,some previous problems might be more comprehensive in consideration.For example,the previous excessive industrialization has led to environmental deterioration, thereby how to protect the environment and natural resources has become the key issue of society development.In the past, people may just think of reducing sewage discharge, which actually did not fundamentally solve the problem. But now we have put forward the slogan of sustainable development, advocating the recycling of resources and turning waste into treasure.As a result,it is very obvious to witness the notable improvement of the environmental quality.
In conclusion,the decline in thinking ability may undoubtedly be possible to have an impact on some people that over rely on technology products.But the benefits of technology for problem solving are also clear to see:With the burden of thinking reduced, people can be able to think about more complex puzzles. Although the adverse effects of technology on the mind of human will continue to be discussed, I still believe that as long as we use technology correctly, the disadvantages can be weakened, and the advantages will greatly benefit us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e that over rely on technology products.But the benefits of technology for problem ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in many cases, in spite of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3148.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 541.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81885397412 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61224236469 2.79657885939 129% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541589648799 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 1007.1 704.065955056 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.38355408 60.3974514979 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.153846154 118.986275619 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.6153846154 23.4991977007 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5384615385 5.21951772744 336% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275354096074 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105092236005 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602073327057 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16383774109 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534898854753 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 14.1392134831 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 4.48 48.8420337079 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.1743820225 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.36 12.1639044944 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.38706741573 128% => OK
difficult_words: 173.0 100.480337079 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 11.8971910112 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.7820224719 229% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
... has been penetrating into peoples lives,as a result of which people are immersed i...
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Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...be undermined if people are excessively dependant on technology.But technology provides a...
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Suggestion: But
...are excessively dependant on technology.But technology provides a shortcut to solve...
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... solve problems in every aspect of life.Furthermore,in spite of the appearance of more and ...
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...lems in every aspect of life.Furthermore,in spite of the appearance of more and mor...
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Suggestion: , technology
...leverly and effectively. First of all,technology really helps people a lot,including rel...
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...all,technology really helps people a lot,including relieve the burden of thinking.For exam...
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...ncluding relieve the burden of thinking.For example,in the past scientific research...
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...lieve the burden of thinking.For example,in the past scientific research environmen...
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...ate data even though spared all efforts.In this case, electronic calculators that ...
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...s was invented. Not only that, computers,which can be applied in almost all fields, ha...
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... to think and solve problems. Therefore, technology makes peoples research field ...
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...llect and perception. I have to admit,technology does cause a decline in our ability to ...
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...lculators to complete simple calculation,the computing power decreases. Convenient t...
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...ustomed to help through technical means.For example, many people look at the comput...
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... reply in the same way without thinking.Moreover,communication technology development ca...
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...n the same way without thinking.Moreover,communication technology development causes rapid com...
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...n ability decreases. Most importantly,with the development of science and technolo...
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...blems that we had not considered before.Take the cognition of the universe as an exa...
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... for testing the theory of the universe.When it comes to the center of the universe,...
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...der to establish a new one step by step.Human’s cognitive level gradually expands wit...
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...hnology, close to the truth. In addition,some previous problems might be more compreh...
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... be more comprehensive in consideration.For example,the previous excessive industri...
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...mprehensive in consideration.For example,the previous excessive industrialization ha...
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...me the key issue of society development.In the past, people may just think of redu...
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...sources and turning waste into treasure.As a result,it is very obvious to witness ...
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... environmental quality. In conclusion,the decline in thinking ability may undoubt...
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Suggestion: But
...e that over rely on technology products.But the benefits of technology for problem ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in many cases, in spite of, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3148.0 2235.4752809 141% => OK
No of words: 541.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81885397412 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61224236469 2.79657885939 129% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541589648799 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 1007.1 704.065955056 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.38355408 60.3974514979 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.153846154 118.986275619 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.6153846154 23.4991977007 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5384615385 5.21951772744 336% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275354096074 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105092236005 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602073327057 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16383774109 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534898854753 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 14.1392134831 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 4.48 48.8420337079 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 12.1743820225 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.36 12.1639044944 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.38706741573 128% => OK
difficult_words: 173.0 100.480337079 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 11.8971910112 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.7820224719 229% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.