As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the ages of technological advancement, we are experiencing a easy and comfortable life in order to solve our as usual problems. The blessing of modern science and innovations are really impact on the flow of solving various shortage in the life. Many scientists and researchers dedicately work for the improvement of the lifestyle. As a result, we fortunately are not so late to demonstrate the beauty of scientific knowledge.The world is now changing its own culture and habit according to the necessity of their regular routine basic needs.
After the invention of the computer and disel engine human kind got their own way to flourish and explore more technical acknowledgements. There is a saying in the anicent world that, "Necessary is the mother of invention". From this quote, our new generation can easily realize the importance of the usage of the analytical thinking and imply them in any step of solving any type of lackings in the universe. A great scientist , Albert Einstein had invented the gravity law, the energy equation which has become a game changer theoream in the future time. The people of society sometimes or more of the time are effected by these ideas and techniques. But most of the part of the history is written by the brave inventors whose make a difference between one generation to another.
In the anicent time,people used to making fire to stick two stones all together. At a consequent process, they learnt to calculate and geometrical aspects. For a nice period of the historical purspect, we can observe the world is changing its form. Measuring quite accurately in doing every problems the result is being very much predictable to the scientific knowledge.In this century we are lucky enough to see the artificial intelligence and machine leraning to rule over the earth .From educational purpose to satellite launching it is vastly used as a safer treatment for the authority and the delegate of our time.
As it is now crystal clear that without the contribution of new and modern assistance, it will be a huge descrimination in our beautiful planet. Network communication,Automobile intregration,computer science development,new sales marketing concept will be more efficient in the new time
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ogical advancement, we are experiencing a easy and comfortable life in order to s...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'impacted'.
Suggestion: impacted
...dern science and innovations are really impact on the flow of solving various shortage...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
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...rate the beauty of scientific knowledge.The world is now changing its own culture a...
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Suggestion: ,
...kings in the universe. A great scientist , Albert Einstein had invented the gravit...
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...ration to another. In the anicent time,people used to making fire to stick two stones...
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...predictable to the scientific knowledge.In this century we are lucky enough to s...
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Suggestion:
...entific knowledge.In this century we are lucky enough to see the artificial intel...
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... machine leraning to rule over the earth .From educational purpose to satellite la...
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...achine leraning to rule over the earth .From educational purpose to satellite launch...
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... beautiful planet. Network communication,Automobile intregration,computer science developme...
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...rk communication,Automobile intregration,computer science development,new sales marketing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15027322404 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34269906593 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4742860907 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8125 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109486076847 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317338654499 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257399331571 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583013134898 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02113294055 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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