As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology: a boon or a curse, a debate which has been going on for the measurable past, is an intriguing one. While technology has surely made our life smoother and easier, it has no-doubt affected the way we think, behave and live as a society. It has impacted our life in a positive and fascinating manner. Nevertheless, as with a coin, it has both beneficial and detrimental effects.
The presence, development and implementation of technology is proof for our ability to think critically and find solutions. The practical implementation of technology requires us humans to think “out of the box” and thus be more creative and original in our approaches. The advent of technological age has freed us from performing mundane tasks such as calculations, filing of tax returns. It has significantly increased our effective and productive while performing daily routine tasks.
Technology has opened up new avenues and introduced new scenario which require us to think differently. For example, excessive use of petroleum products to run car engines and generators has led to ecological destruction previously unknown. It has forced us to redress our inventions and address their ramifications, a whole new field of problems, which before the industrial age was unheard of.
Nevertheless, one might argue, that relying too much on technology for our perfunctory tasks have deteriorated our thinking ability to some extent. For instance, relying more and more on GPS has affected our spatial ability. The innovation of social media portals, for example Facebook, has reduced our daily face to face interactions drastically thus affecting our interpersonal and social skills.
Technology has no doubt affected our thinking abilities and attitudes. It has made us free of worrying about a particular set of problems, while introducing a new niche of exacting problems.
- Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws 75
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities 50
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develo 50
- One can best understand the most important characteristics of a society by studying its major cities 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, as for, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 295.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38644067797 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20209641183 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9058674071 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.3125 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227967039358 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782626506385 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840883839419 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121863425332 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652480571417 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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