People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should
consider the reasons for which the statement may or may not be true and explain how these considerations
shape your position.
Rules are the binding pillars of any organisation, be it a government or a school. Rules are generally put into effect to maintain law and order and fairness of the authoritative system. However, rules should be beneficial for everyone and should be applicable to everyone equally. Nonetheless, rules should not be blindly followed and remain unchallenged.
There are certain rules that need modification as it becomes outdated. There are certain reservations in the education system in India which reserves a certain percentage of seats for the backward classes for a minimal score in entrance exams to different medical and engineering colleges and universities. This rule was made in the early 80's when there was a community that was considered untouchables and were devoid of equality in education or profession. However, due to social reforms and privileges that were granted to these communities, they re no longer the disadvantaged class. Infact, many such people exploit this reservation of seats as they are required to score a minimal 50% in the entrance tests while others require 65-70% to get into these universities. This leads to degradation of the quality of education in the prestigious universities.
Another example is the demonetization that changed the economy of the nation. After the demonetization was imposed, the government was able to eradicate black money to a great extent. However, this came with a prize as people faced a lot of difficulties in procuring the new currency notes for there was a shortage in supply that lasted almost 3 months. Everywhere,people stopped accepting older currency notes and this lead to long queues in the ATM. There were reports where people died of exhaustion from standing in the queues for the entire day.
The reign of Hitler serves as a best example why rules should never go unchecked. He had the best interest of the Germans, but his orders and laws lead to an almost abolishment of the Jews from the face of Earth. Also, the dictatorial leadership of North Korea has constricted the freedoms of its citizens to such an extent that its almost next to impossible to leave the country.
Hence, government and authoritative bodies are the benefactors of the society and they are the best judge when deciding important laws that need to be executed for they have a better knowledge of what is better for the society. They take the holistic development of the nation into consideration. However, these laws should never go unchecked and should be modified as per the current demands.
- People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and 50
- School should do more to prepare students for the non academic aspects of adulthood Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
... that lasted almost 3 months. Everywhere,people stopped accepting older currency notes ...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... day. The reign of Hitler serves as a best example why rules should never go ...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('almost') instead an adjective, or a noun ('abolishment') instead of another adjective.
...ermans, but his orders and laws lead to an almost abolishment of the Jews from the face of Earth. Als...
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Line 9, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be modified as per the current demands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, while, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11217183771 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98963716962 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520286396181 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0741952964 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122219496414 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355694504501 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025228607727 0.0758088955206 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643884616191 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191417841773 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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