People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers
I partially disagree that people who make decisions with emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
I speculate emotional people are fools they don't think practically or pragmatically.For example my brother borrowed from me an amount of some money but didn't gave them yet so the decision taken was taken emotionally that's why I was really disappointed.
Another example can be of a leader who made his son as the party president although he was rookie ,inexperienced but he was really attached with his father emotionally or histrionically.After the leader lose the election he was in a great sorrow why did he meticulously didn't decide the party president as the power of the has gone to the opponent party.
but some times being emotional in our life then it will be a key to success for example thinking about everything before taking a career decision like after higher secondary what is our dream to pursue subjects like engineering,management,accountancy what are the demands in these subjects,how much competition are in these fields,what field is at boom in the market?and now we should ask our heart that what is our passion from which doing whole day we would not mundane for a single second then only we should take a decision so that we would feel penitent for a single time.
At the end I conclude that not always being emotionally taken decisions are futile.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, second, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 238.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13025210084 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45303770436 2.79657885939 123% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609243697479 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 23.0359550562 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.711877101 60.3974514979 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.2 118.986275619 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.6 23.4991977007 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.21951772744 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313247460861 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.24182674178 0.0831039109588 291% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.277994870983 0.0758088955206 367% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24182674178 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.277994870983 0.0667264976115 417% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 14.1392134831 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 48.8420337079 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 12.1743820225 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.2143820225 185% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.