The issue that people are poor decision makers if they take decisions based on emotions is contentious one. While each school of thought has its own strengthen and weaknesses, i completely agree that decision are poor when decision maker take decision based on emotions and his intuitive thinking because these decision were not planed, no team work, without considering help of board members. Furthermore, when these --emotion based-- decision prove devastating for companies, decision maker try to assuage the board members.
Firstly, Big organisations are successful because they take decision after consider all factors and feedback from all stakeholders. Furthermore, Team work is must in big decision making. even a small em0tion based decison can prove wrong for company.
Second, Emotions are temparely, decision are forever, no thinking mean devastating effect and bad reputation, customer feedback
Finally, Decision makers should consider all aspect and ramification of the decision. every company considers many important factors like geography, political situation, culture etc before expanding their business to new country. addiotnallythey can not simply go there start working. doing so can bring unwanted consequences.
However, Sometime emotion based decision can prove good, for example if Apple CEO, however board members can protest againt him for this decison because they think about profit/loss scenarios all the time, takes a decision of distributing its Kindle product to college or school student at some discount, can prove propitious. if this happens then local government can bring some good things to Apple like tax free business, or any other business related help. now here decison was made on emotion but proved good for both Apple, and nation.
In conclusion, Emotion based decision are not good for any organisation and can prove devastating and can lead to big loss.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.316109422492 0.240241500013 132% => OK
Verbs: 0.151975683891 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0729483282675 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0577507598784 0.0497285424764 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0243161094225 0.0444667217837 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100303951368 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0547112462006 0.0406280797675 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76363020203 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0151975683891 0.030933414821 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0668693009119 0.0997080785238 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0334346504559 0.0249443105267 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00607902735562 0.0148568991511 41% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1915.0 2732.02544248 70% => OK
No of words: 291.0 452.878318584 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.58075601375 6.0361032391 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.415807560137 0.366273622748 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.364261168385 0.280924506359 130% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.257731958763 0.200843997647 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13058419244 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76363020203 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615120274914 0.48968727796 126% => OK
Word variations: 69.0339013054 55.4138127331 125% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7857142857 23.380412469 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.1219905087 59.4972553346 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.785714286 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 23.380412469 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 0.674092028746 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 57.2118311242 51.4728631049 111% => OK
Elegance: 2.01298701299 1.64882698954 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244193063713 0.391690518653 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.09236274907 0.123202303941 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0922254756368 0.077325440228 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.572877593361 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.221022876593 0.149214159877 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907433180876 0.161403998019 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720132875671 0.0892212321368 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.177784565141 0.385218514788 46% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0918104198374 0.0692045440612 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133845382009 0.275328986314 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569961305165 0.0653680567796 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.