The issue is based on emotion and logic. These are complex things. In logic behind the decision, people's mood role is aggressive. So, before the decision, good or bad mood impacts the decision. In this case, discuss the mood's positive and negative effects on the decision.
In this scenario, The people make a decision based on emotion.so two things occur, one the strong decision as well as some poor decision. After this short out the decision is poor or strong, which type of emotion was before the decision making. Sometimes a very bad mood after the decision will be harmful to work. So, people like businessmen, doctors, engineers, politicians, and the country's leaders mood was very good before some kind of decision taken because those people's decisions very impact on the country or company.
In the negative mood scenario, peoples take very poor decisions threw loose. Sometimes, the nation's leader's poor decisions bad impact on the countries people.
In conclusion, In any field or position who people take a decision before this people's moods impact your good or bad decision.
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 70
- Educators should take students interests into account when planning the content of the courses they teach 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree wi 33
- Claim Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today Reason The world today is significantly more complex than it was even in the relatively recent past Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or 50
- The following appeared as part of an article in the education section of a Waymarsh City newspaper Throughout the last two decades those who earned graduate degrees found it very difficult to get jobs teaching their academic specialties at the college 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 2235.4752809 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 442.535393258 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.55969084622 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48529005685 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 215.323595506 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 704.065955056 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8704849916 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374120279241 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154006056598 0.0831039109588 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107250106688 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234788677216 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112496942127 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 100.480337079 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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