The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
The author claims here that real talent of a popular musician can't be accurately accessed until the musician has been dead for several generation so that his or her fame does not interfere with an honest assessment. but there had been many great musicians such as Michael Jackson, Bob Marley who were great had great talent, were famous for their talent and still be known for their extraordinary talent.
Michael Jackson had great endeavor in 2000's era and known as the god of the dancer. Author's claim does not valid with this example as Michael Jakcson assessed as great musician when he was still alive. He has numerous fan following but that doesn't interefer with assessment. As he is still famous and known for his talent and immortal in the heart of music and dance lover.
Bob Marley also had great career and was famous among youth. He populariesed some rare music types like reggae, ska and rocksteady. He was internationally famous and still know for his contribution to music industry and his talent. His fame doesn't interfere with an honest assessment as his was famous in his time and still famous after his death.
There might be few musician whose talent can not be accurately assessed accurately while they are alive as there fame influence it. There blind followers might affect the honest assessment during there era. But we can not gearalise these claim for as there are some exception like Michael Jackson and Bob Marley.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... that real talent of a popular musician cant be accurately accessed until the musici...
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Suggestion: But
...ot interfere with an honest assessment. but there had been many great musicians suc...
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Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 2000s'.
Suggestion: in the 2000s
.... Michael Jackson had great endeavor in 2000s era and known as the god of the dancer....
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Suggestion: doesn't
... He has numerous fan following but that doesnt interefer with assessment. As he is sti...
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Suggestion:
... was famous among youth. He populariesed some rare music types like reggae, ska a...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...music industry and his talent. His fame doesnt interfere with an honest assessment as ...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun musician seems to be countable; consider using: 'few musicians'.
Suggestion: few musicians
...mous after his death. There might be few musician whose talent can not be accurately asse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 58.6224719101 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 247.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87854251012 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40685449942 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51012145749 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2055446467 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6923076923 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419642534235 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141998616581 0.0831039109588 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17925567464 0.0758088955206 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256751032314 0.150359130593 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150680711155 0.0667264976115 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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