"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."
Unity of nation is most important and fundamental feature of any country. If the rules followed by the people throughout the country are same, then it strengthens the unity of the country. So the same education throughout the country till students enter the college is also important. It has some significant benefits.
Firstly, if all students study the same national curriculum until they enter the college then it will bring all students on the same level. Students in each part of the country will have the same knowledge. This will give everyone equal opportunity to study in best institute throughout the country. For example, if the subjects like mathematics and science have a same national curriculum. Therefore, it will be more advantageous as everyone will learn same concepts.
Also, in a country like India, people are of diverse culture. They speak different languages. If all student has the same curriculum throughout the country, everyone will learn the national language of the country along with their regional language. This will help to unite the country as everyone can fluently speak the national language.
However, the same curriculum throughout the country will not be beneficial for every subject. Subjects like History, Geography should have regional content so that student can easily relate things around them. So,atleast at lower grades, regional history and geography should be taught. But in higher classes, History, Geography can have the same curriculum throughout the country.
Therefore, the nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum throughout until they enter college. However, in some cases, it will not be a good idea to implements. But in a broader sense, it will impart significant benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , atleast
...can easily relate things around them. So,atleast at lower grades, regional history and ...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly relate things around them. So,atleast at lower grades, regional history and ge...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 281.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35943060498 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71969486576 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459074733096 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4141687778 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.3 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.05 23.4991977007 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285252463931 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992132304287 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128639533364 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188469537191 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929117385706 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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