School policies should be based as much on what employers want as well as what students and teachers want.
School is the place where we learn the basic of everything, we get to know the world we live in, we get to know to essence of language that we speak, we get to learn the basic calculations that are to be done in our daily living and more over we learn how the life has to be lived.It is no wrong to say that school is our second home which help built the quality that every individuals posses.I support to the way education is undertaken in the school but their are certain things which should be considered in the modern education.When I aspire to become an engineer in future, do I need to learn the chapters that a medical practitioner require?
The education system that we are following is quite old and in need of a revamp, Earlier the world was not aware of the technologies, they didn't know how to make use of it, in the present situation it's not the case is, we have got helping technologies which are well capable of giving information when required, and we don't require to have a depth knowledge of every field of education.In a world of no proper communication and technologies we were needed to be aware of the situations that may arise, but In today's world if someone gets fever do he need to have knowledge about the medicines he should consume, rather he has got Google which can answer his situation and if he still find it helpless he can video call a doctor and have his prescription without visiting the doctor personally.
With so much luxury do we need to learn every subject that are not of our interest, I understand that every individual should have a basic knowledge of every aspects of life, but do he need to be a Doctor, an Engineer, an Electrician, etc at the same time, rather the curriculum should be made more what is to be the interest of the student and the firm or field he is interested in.
We often see situation that the quality that is required by the employers do lack in students, one of the major reason to this is the number of subjects that the school need them to learn, rather if they should be made to learn what interests them and what is the need of the situation, it will help them to built a bright future.
The education system that we follow are often old and are not to the interest of the students nor the teachers, it's just because it's the way it has been going from the past, we stick to that.Their should be a more independent education system where students and teachers should be given more liberty to shape their own way of education which should be more industry oriented and will have the practical aspect of education rather than the theoretical one that the old system has.
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- Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct. 66
- During the past year,Alta Manufacturing had thirty percent more on-the-job accidents than nearby Panoply Industries, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours. Experts believe that a significant contributing factor in many on-the-job accidents 77
- Public figure such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will loose at least some of their privacy. 33
- Too much time, money, and energy are spent developing new and more elaborate technology. Society should instead focus on maximizing the use of existing technology for the immediate benefit of its citizens. 50
- School policies should be based as much on what employers want as well as what students and teachers want 55
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, still, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57716701903 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74087435402 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443974630021 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 94.0 23.0359550562 408% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.44952332 60.3974514979 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 433.0 118.986275619 364% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.6 23.4991977007 403% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 7.80617977528 423% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166476718241 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106660752106 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476027006032 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106660752106 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476027006032 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.4 14.1392134831 335% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.47 48.8420337079 -32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 12.1743820225 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.47 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.38706741573 128% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 11.8971910112 488% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.6 11.2143820225 353% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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