School policies should be based as much on what employers want as well as what students and teachers want.
<p style="white-space: normal;">School is the place where we learn the basic of everything, we get to know the world we live in, we get to know to essence of language that we speak, we get to learn the basic calculations that are to be done in our daily living and more over we learn how the life has to be lived.It is no wrong to say that school is our second home which help built the quality that every individuals posses.I support to the way education is undertaken in the school but their are certain things which should be considered in the modern education.When I aspire to become an engineer in future, do I need to learn the chapters that a medical practitioner require?</p><p style="white-space: normal;">The education system that we are following is quite old and in need of a revamp, Earlier the world was not aware of the technologies, they didn't know how to make use of it, in the present situation it's not the case is, we have got helping technologies which are well capable of giving information when required, and we don't require to have a depth knowledge of every field of education.In a world of no proper communication and technologies we were needed to be aware of the situations that may arise, but In today's world if someone gets fever do he need to have knowledge about the medicines he should consume, rather he has got Google which can answer his situation and if he still find it helpless he can video call a doctor and have his prescription without visiting the doctor personally.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">With so much luxury do we need to learn every subject that are not of our interest, I understand that every individual should have a basic knowledge of every aspects of life, but do he need to be a Doctor, an Engineer, an Electrician, etc at the same time, rather the curriculum should be made more what is to be the interest of the student and the firm or field he is interested in.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">We often see situation that the quality that is required by the employers do lack in students, one of the major reason to this is the number of subjects that the school need them to learn, rather if they should be made to learn what interests them and what is the need of the situation, it will help them to built a bright future.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">The education system that we follow are often old and are not to the interest of the students nor the teachers, it's just because it's the way it has been going from the past, we stick to that.Their should be a more independent education system where students and teachers should be given more liberty to shape their own way of education which should be more industry oriented and will have the practical aspect of education rather than the theoretical one that the old system has.</p>
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- Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct. 50
- China has some innovation, but most it is well documented that it reverse engineers everything in its path. It is doubtful that China will have a real consumer middle class like U.S. and Europe. 50
- Too much time, money, and energy are spent developing new and more elaborate technology. Society should instead focus on maximizing the use of existing technology for the immediate benefit of its citizens. 50
- Throughout the country last year, as more and more children below the age of nine participated in youth-league softball and soccer, over 80,000 of these young players suffered injuries. When interviewed for a recent study, youth-league softball players in 77
- Public figure such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will loose at least some of their privacy. 33
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, still, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 494.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7955465587 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54049740393 2.79657885939 127% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437246963563 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.9 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 494.0 23.0359550562 2144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2369.0 118.986275619 1991% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 494.0 23.4991977007 2102% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 44.0 5.21951772744 843% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143980023946 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143980023946 0.0831039109588 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143980023946 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 248.2 14.1392134831 1755% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -421.47 48.8420337079 -863% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 194.8 12.1743820225 1600% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.04 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 30.66 8.38706741573 366% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.8971910112 496% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 199.6 11.2143820225 1780% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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