Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
In this modern era, technology is improving day by day. People are depending on science and technology for their daily life. Technology will solve all our societies problems someday. The prompt addresses this issue by proposing that our societies problem could be removed by using science and modern technology. I mostly agree with this position for two reasons, which I will elucidate below. But I do concede that without the interference of people, technology and science could not solve all our society problems.
To begin, I believe that modern technology is so much improving day by day and it will be beneficial to use this technology to solve our environmental issues. World population is increasing and people are using technology for their better life. Technology has positive and negative effects on our society. But people can use it for a good purpose. For example, to remove plastic from sea water technology can help us to collect all plastics from beach area. Few days ago, a company organized a party for their profit in beach area. They all used plastic plates and bottle for their lunch and threw it on the beach area. There were approximately 500 people present in that program. After ending their program, event organizer hired a robot to collect all plastic and throw all of them in the bin. It did not take much time for the robot. Nevertheless technology could not help us always perfectly. Sometimes it may mistake which can hamper our life. For instance, my friend use remote technology in his home. He has a new born baby at home and the whole house is connected to wifi. Few days ago, my friend was working in the living area and the baby was upper bedroom and sleeping. He was watching his baby from the monitor in the hall. After some hour later he saw that the baby was sleeping and he was relax to see that. Few hours later he realized that the wifi was not updated real time information. He got to the room and saw that baby was in the floor and was died. He was speechless to see that. Technology does not always help us to solve our social problems.
In conclusion. I agree that science and technology are so helpful for our daily life. But it has some negative effects in our society. If we utilize technology perfectly then it could be solve our social problems easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...hnology is improving day by day. People are depending on science and technology for their dai...
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Line 3, column 838, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...t did not take much time for the robot. Nevertheless technology could not help us always per...
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Line 3, column 1304, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relaxed'.
Suggestion: relaxed
...w that the baby was sleeping and he was relax to see that. Few hours later he realize...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s some negative effects in our society. If we utilize technology perfectly then it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67567567568 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49875096327 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464373464373 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7466583613 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.4333333333 118.986275619 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5666666667 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170442570318 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504742990132 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576520354827 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156922208354 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758039833432 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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