Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
With advancement in science and technologies, in upcomming future their may a time where all of our current society problems will be solved.
The primary motive of development in science and technologies is the improvemnt in humans way of living and facilitating one's life. According to Harvard business review study, our current lifestyle and society problems are far less as compared in early 90s. It has been decresed by 63%, because of better technologies and science advancement.
How is science and technologies is helping in society problems? The current science and technologies have advance greatly that we have medcinie of almost every disease. Reduced the ardoulus work that farmer need to do for crop production, pesticide for healthier crops, communication from across seven sea at a touch of a button. Although each and every good things might have a side effects, just like yin and yaan. Due to increased technologies we are becoming apart as an community to an individual. The use of the advancement is on every individual, it can provide many benefits and also drawbacks.
To conclude, The advancement in science and technologies will be able to solve our society problems upto an extend. it complety on us how we use it. if used in a rightous way we will be able to solve all of our societial problems in upcoming future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03125 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96917290221 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584821428571 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4080857761 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6923076923 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215953047785 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844455076762 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086752926657 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147634643383 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687979630366 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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