Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
In this age of advancing technology and breakthroughs in the scientific world, it is certain that science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society's problems.
From the beginning of the industrial revolution in Europe, science and technology have been progressing with leaps and bounds like none other. Only a hundred years ago the idea of communication was limited to letters sent through post. Now in a relatively short span of time, we have come up with modern and efficient modes of communication, beginning from the now outdated telegraph to the modern age of voice and video calls. This decrease in the gap of communication across countries, communities, and peoples has been largely helpful in dealing with a lot of problems plaguing society.
A huge issue faced by society as late as the 20th century was the mortality rate due to certain one-thought-to-be-invincible diseases like polio, smallpox, tuberculosis et cetera. The rapid progress in the field of medical sciences has made sure that these diseases are now not only preventable, like polio, but also, almost completely eradicated from society, like smallpox. Tuberculosis, although still a viable disease, is largely treatable. Society a few hundred years ago was plagued by various outbreaks, which claimed the lives of many. Now, with modern technology of detection and rapid treatment, people don't have to worry about their lives being cut short due to health issues. A society which is largely healthy will obviously make much more progress and contribute to the development of society.
Pillaging issues in developing and underdeveloped countries such as overpopulation, lack of basic education and healthcare, are all being positively countered through scientific education. Families are encouraged to engage their children in education to make them responsible citizens of society, who in their time can deal with these problems much more effectively due to the knowledge they accumulate.
Although these are clear examples of what science and technology can overcome, we can not overlook the fact that society as a whole has degraded significantly in terms of morals and ethics. Veneration, integrity, and honesty are now applauded as something uncommon, as opposed to being the norm among general people. This is something which in the long run will prove detrimental to the overall development of society because if the general people are not inspired by a robust value system, the fall of such a people is not uncertain. Also, threats we face these days, including wars among nations, are of a much more brutal and large scale. This is largely due to the fact that technology has handed over weapons of such destruction to nations, that their use will certainly ring the bells of doom for a generation, and affect successive generations. But this is a far-fetched event, one that is likely to happen because this technology has itself provided the means of acknowledging the harmful effects of such powers and has contributed to actively choosing to not put into use such powers of destruction.
Therefore, we can certainly say that through ongoing progress and continued developments in the fields of science and technology, we will one day be able to overcome and solve all of society's problems and transform ourselves into conscious and efficient people.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 614, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...f detection and rapid treatment, people dont have to worry about their lives being c...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2830.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 540.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24074074074 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08148370726 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 893.7 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3760441423 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220166336927 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671373984668 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746264437849 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144955478205 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910391003982 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 614, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...f detection and rapid treatment, people dont have to worry about their lives being c...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2830.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 540.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24074074074 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08148370726 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 893.7 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3760441423 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220166336927 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671373984668 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746264437849 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144955478205 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910391003982 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.