Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents”
The content says that the Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training to them at an early age to develop their talent. The issue in this statement is that it is keeping a time frame in which ones talent has to be developed otherwise it is not possible which need not be true.
Firstly, the development of one’s talent is not always based on their age .There are no proven facts that if children are trained at an early age then only they will be able to develop their talents.This context is not supported by any facts, examples, or any studies. if we look at the talented athletes such as Ronaldo, they were not trained from their childhood. Still they developed talents through training and perseverence. If one is hardworking and dedicated at any age anything is possible.
However, there are some added advantages if the training is given at an early age which will make them familiarize with the scenarios, challenges and how to overcome challenges from an early age. This will give them more experience. For example anyone who has talent in dancing or music should be identified and given basics of music or dancing. Any atheletes who having interest in any sport should be familiarized with the basic techniques and introduced to the oppurtunities.
Lastly, we cannot completely agree with the statement that talents should be identified at an early age and trained. It is an added advantage if trained from early age. Anyone who is talented inspite of age they can train themselves and get opportunities through their hard work and dedication. Also there are no supporting fact that they should be trained from early age only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, so, still, then, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 286.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89160839161 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67540100754 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506993006993 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7008808731 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9285714286 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.588076603498 0.243740707755 241% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217238030243 0.0831039109588 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195702631374 0.0758088955206 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.393295861872 0.150359130593 262% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119655780086 0.0667264976115 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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