In the 21st century, there are two parameters that decide the jobs that individual want to apply for. Firsty their interests count and secondly how much scope does their field have.If every individual decides to follow their passion and get the desired jobs it will be both a boon and a bane. It will be boon for the individuals as they will get a chance to work in their field of interest and bane as many people with the same job will not be profitable for any of them and can lead to unemployment.
The one who chooses to follow their passion and choose their field of study may or may not get a job. If the job availability is less , he or she may be unemployed for a long time. If the particular field has higher availability of jobs , then choosing that study is a safe option and if not they need to have a backup plan. For example if a student wishes become an archaeologist and study for the same, but due to lack of availability of jobs he will be without a job.
People following their passion might result in an imbalance in the society. Interests are mostly born by seeing the end result of the journey. Someone would want to become a photographer as they might want to travel the world while someone would have a real attachment to the camera. This might result in everyone choosing one field of study and other fields will be ignored. As a result there will be a troop of unemployed people who have knowledge only about a particular field and cannot work in other field where there are available jobs. This imbalance will affect the society .
If we consider the example of Chartered Accountant Exam, there are many aspirants but the passing percent is in single digits. Not everyone can become a Chartered Accountant as the demand for their jobs is very less and as a result of less demand their pay is high. If everyone get the opportunity to become a CA there will be more CA’s and less job vacancies. As a result most of the crowd will be unempoyed. Hence the evaluation method is kept tough which tests every individual with rigorous questions
Following passion and helping the society is desire of every individual. It has many advantages like one can explore in their choice of study, they will not work for money, but it has many disadvantages like unemployment and economic imbalance in the society which weigh down the advantages. Therefore i feel people choose their field of study on availability of jobs in that field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58049886621 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55258390724 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8249686402 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.05 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281143858204 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10294161025 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11179656658 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177434320377 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691224478041 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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