Teachers are the guide for the journey of a students life. Every student is different, they have different interests, different talents and different ways to tackle a situation. Hence students academic performance should not be a parameter to decide teachers salaries. As an academic performance includes many things like the interest in that subject, the students ways of learning that subject it will be unfair to rely the faculties salary on the students academic performance/
If a students academic performance decides the faculties salaires it will be unjust. As a job of a teacher is to teach and clarify things, whereas as a pupil it his his or her responsibility to study, understand, revise and explore more on the subject. A proteges can explain the same concept infinite number of times, but only when the student approaches to her. For example if a trigonometry is taught which involves conundrum problems and a certain student does not pay attention and eventually fails in the exam , while other who diligently worked hard passed with flying colours. In this situation it will be biased if the faculty is blamed, as due one student her salary is affected. As a teacher he or she has done their duty of teaching the concept.Or there can be some other reason why the student has performed badly like some family issue.
Moreover even the interests of the student should be considered. If a faculty teaches a subject which a large group of student do not like they may pass with average marks, in this case the faculty cannot be blamed.For example if one third of the class dislikes literature or some students cannot manage to write well, in such scenarios the class average is likely to drop as we cannot expect every student to be a proficient writer. Neither the faculty nor the pupil should be blamed here as both of them are trying their best. If the average decides the salary of the teacher it will be bane for the faculty as because students are not interested she has suffered.
If the performance parameter decides teachers salaries it will more of a stressful environment. Where instead of a student learning in a care free environment , they will be under the pressure to perform well as their performance wil decide their faculties salaries. Every faculty will force the students to study well and this can result in burgeoning mental pressure. There can be cases that faculties start using unfair means so that the students start performing wel.This will disrupt the whole essence of education and there will be a pressure to perform well
To recapitulate a students performance cannot be a parameter to decide a faculties salary as there every child is different. It will be unjust to the faculty as even if they do their best , they are not receiving the fruit that they should receive . Instead of relying the teachers salary on students academic performance, the teaching methods can be improvised based on students performance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...hers are the guide for the journey of a students life. Every student is different, they ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...d different ways to tackle a situation. Hence students academic performance should no...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'faculties'' or 'faculty's'?
Suggestion: faculties'; faculty's
...t subject it will be unfair to rely the faculties salary on the students academic perform...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n the students academic performance/ If a students academic performance decides...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...he students academic performance/ If a students academic performance decides the facult...
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Suggestion: his
...d clarify things, whereas as a pupil it his his or her responsibility to study, underst...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A protege' or simply 'proteges'?
Suggestion: A protege; Proteges
...revise and explore more on the subject. A proteges can explain the same concept infinite n...
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Suggestion: ,
...tention and eventually fails in the exam , while other who diligently worked hard ...
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Suggestion: Or
...done their duty of teaching the concept.Or there can be some other reason why the ...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...formed badly like some family issue. Moreover even the interests of the student shoul...
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Suggestion: For
... this case the faculty cannot be blamed.For example if one third of the class disli...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...are not interested she has suffered. If the performance parameter decides teach...
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Suggestion: ,
...dent learning in a care free environment , they will be under the pressure to perf...
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Suggestion:
...in burgeoning mental pressure. There can be cases that faculties start using unfa...
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Suggestion: This
... that the students start performing wel.This will disrupt the whole essence of educa...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...re to perform well To recapitulate a students performance cannot be a parameter to de...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'faculties'' or 'faculty's'?
Suggestion: faculties'; faculty's
...mance cannot be a parameter to decide a faculties salary as there every child is differen...
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Suggestion: ,
...he faculty as even if they do their best , they are not receiving the fruit that t...
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Suggestion: .
...iving the fruit that they should receive . Instead of relying the teachers salary ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...should receive . Instead of relying the teachers salary on students academic performance...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...hing methods can be improvised based on students performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, third, well, whereas, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2470.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 500.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73165794938 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 793.8 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.2719943439 60.3974514979 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3157894737 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278859702169 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109197192649 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05948122564 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191194166547 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022442316724 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.