In my opinion, any entity has responsibilities towards their country. Be it a school student, police officer or even corporations. I believe that any corporation is responsible for promoting the well-being of its local society and environment including the corporations that have the sole goal of seeking more revenues. And I will give my reasons for this position in this text.
With no doubts, corporations depend on the local community and environment for their success. Many industries are depending on the resources of their surroundings, be it raw materials or human resources. For example, Starbucks, the number one coffee company in the USA, has created a trade in South America, where the coffee beans it uses, are planted and harvested. Also, it attracts the locals to work in its stores. In this manner, it is a mutual benefit. The corporation is flourishing, getting a good reputation regionally and internationally and at the same time increasing its revenues. Moreover, it is contributing to the local community by constantly creating new job opportunities for the local people.
Consider another example, assume a fuel corporation that is working under law was found to contaminate the neighboring village by the leakage of a poisonous gas. In fact, what happened has forced the locals to leave to another village. Apparently, the people had to endure additional costs of finding new place and medications due to the environmental damage the fuel corporation has made to their village. With this evidence, I believe that corporations should have responsibilities to their surroundings (the people and environment). They should take them into their consideration before they must resume any goal or plan.
Someone would say that corporation should only strive to seek revenues and other entities in the country can take charge to promote the environment and local communities. But with the first example I provided I strongly believe that corporations can still strive to increase their revenues and at the same time they can provide support to their surroundings. If for example a company started to put environment to its consideration this will consequently give it a good reputation among people and therefore attract people to work for this company which guarantees more money.
- "Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make a 50
- The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that they have more leisure time.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for t 58
- The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree 62
- The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that they have more leisure time.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for t 50
- The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that they have more leisure time.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for t 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ment for their success. Many industries are depending on the resources of their surroundings,...
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Line 4, column 624, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fore they must resume any goal or plan. Someone would say that corporation shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, as for, for example, in fact, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30054644809 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16349553852 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.640999157 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.105263158 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245102690761 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676638165962 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797007419439 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154882187009 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073449879414 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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