Even though corporate main responsibility is to make as much as money they can , provided they operate within the law, their other responsibility involves promoting the well being of the societies and environment in which they operate.
Yes, I agree that, Corporate's main aim is to make the profit as much as they can cause that is one of the main reason many people establish their own company. If a corporate is working in a situation where it is not able to generate the revenue then it becomes difficult for the existence of it only.
However, corporate as other responsibilities other than just making money. They should look after the well beings of the employees who work for them. As the employees struggles a lot for building the corporate they work for and also they devote majority of their time in the corporate.So it is one of the responsibilities of corporate to make sure their employees are in healthy condition and can offer free medical check up for them, provide perks like holiday trip for them and their family , sponsored by corporate ,encourage them to play sports which will make them fit .
It is not just taking care of their employees, but also they should make the environment better in which they operate. As they use their surrounding environment for the well being of corporate they should give back to the society. Recently the tech giant company infosys contributed a financially to build a Hospital in a near by village , where they have one of their branch. And moreover now a days many corporate are following the culture to give back to society by doing voluntary work in the surrounding places where the corporate builds are. Like cleaning drive in the near by beach, planting the trees as a part of environmental day, providing the food for the homeless people.
i agree with former part of the claim, that Corporate is responsible to promote the well being of the societies and environment in which they operate. Which indeed induce the responsibility in the common people to promote better environment around them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...and environment in which they operate. Which indeed induce the responsibility in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88603988604 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79277839942 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472934472934 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.4400555444 60.3974514979 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.923076923 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429645630022 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184277726111 0.0831039109588 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151295402826 0.0758088955206 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303697860806 0.150359130593 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169790344148 0.0667264976115 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.