Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The extent to which the government should fund the arts is a complex issue involving a tug-of-war between the burgeoning of the arts and the integrity of the arts. On balance, however, I tend to agree that funding of arts must be done by the government in order for the burgeoning of arts.
One compelling argument against such funding of arts is that they promote the arts from one generation to another generation. The government has the power to increase awareness about anything among people. If the government funds the arts then people come forth to develop propensity on diversified arts. Moreover, ingenuity among students can be increased by learning arts which wouldn't happen if the government didn't fund arts in schools or colleges.
A second compelling argument against such funding of arts is arts not only play a vital role in education but also can be used to combat mental and physical illness. For instance, there are situations where art therapy programs have been employed to deal with traumatic brain injuries. If the government funds arts then such programs can be made in order to deal with people's health problems also.
Those who disagree with my point may argue, arts can lose their integrity because some fake artists might produce an exact replica of the original art and gain more profit than the original artist. In addition to that, some artists may feel a threat to their position because such funding might bring some connoisseurs to their field, and hence they are antithetical to this view. Some feel that government funding might not reach because of the debauchery.
In recapitulation, I acknowledge that the government funding of arts can help burgeoning it and reaches to all people. If the government doesn't do funding some best aesthetic works eventually fall into obscurity. The songs that increase awareness and caricature that present some beautiful paints and mainly regional arts are forgotten by people thereby affecting the diversity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...can be increased by learning arts which wouldnt happen if the government didnt fund art...
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... to deal with traumatic brain injuries. If the government funds arts then such pro...
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...ause some fake artists might produce an exact replica of the original art and gain more profi...
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...the government funding of arts can help burgeoning it and reaches to all people. If the go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 326.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12883435583 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66683524753 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2730386559 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.466666667 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510098580153 0.243740707755 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198859816273 0.0831039109588 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921019465265 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312582530395 0.150359130593 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741632779536 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.