Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The term ‘arts’ encompass the fields of human creativity as in, dances, music, painting, theatre, scupture work, etc. Contributions in all these fields collectively form a versatile, diverse, and rich cultures. These are, in other words, ways of expressions and they depict the talent and advancement of the society as a whole. The promotion and freedom of expression is a responsibility of the governments given that, even the most developed nation would fall back in the race for progress if it does not have enough artistic talent to represent its cultural progress or heritage. While it is no...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1176, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...yles. And along with that, we gradually loose our cultural heritage. Hence, governmen...
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Line 3, column 1287, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nds for the holistic promotion of arts, so as to keep our culture alive. They can do so ...
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Line 7, column 781, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar fashion" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...lated government funding too, will work in a similar fashion given that the 'source' of mo...
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Line 7, column 1315, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Wei
...ina could not deter the prolixity of Ai Wei Wei, whose Olympic Bird's Nest stadium...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'of course', 'in other words', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264186046512 0.240241500013 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.13488372093 0.157235817809 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0679069767442 0.0880659088768 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0418604651163 0.0497285424764 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0390697674419 0.0444667217837 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133023255814 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0353488372093 0.0406280797675 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00850397824 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.026976744186 0.030933414821 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00558139534884 0.0016655270985 335% => OK
Determiners: 0.104186046512 0.0997080785238 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0195348837209 0.0249443105267 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0093023255814 0.0148568991511 63% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 5917.0 2732.02544248 217% => OK
No of words: 955.0 452.878318584 211% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19581151832 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.55905336192 4.58838876751 121% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373821989529 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309947643979 0.280924506359 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223036649215 0.200843997647 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160209424084 0.132149295362 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00850397824 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Unique words: 455.0 219.290929204 207% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476439790576 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 66.8766458333 55.4138127331 121% => OK
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6194690265 184% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 25.1315789474 23.380412469 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5964545844 59.4972553346 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.710526316 141.124799967 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1315789474 23.380412469 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 56.1263433453 51.4728631049 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.00431034483 1.64882698954 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.634375362167 0.391690518653 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111007793627 0.123202303941 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0591372071225 0.077325440228 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.527160339946 0.547984918172 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145826709446 0.149214159877 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255592199919 0.161403998019 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104431033594 0.0892212321368 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.593671543161 0.385218514788 154% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0516719115909 0.0692045440612 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.49318460493 0.275328986314 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426981303119 0.0653680567796 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 28.0 10.4325221239 268% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 26.0 7.22455752212 360% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 32.0 13.5995575221 235% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.