Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
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Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
With the advancing world, a good balance between logical reasoning and morality is what's left behind. People are divided on the opinion that in order to produce a moral society morality or logical reasoning should be the foundation. While logical reasoning helps a person to make a 'right' decision on the basis of facts and arguments presented to him , morals suggest that decision should not be based on one's benefit , it should reflect doing for a social cause. With this declining moral and logical education, it would become very difficult to see people helping each other. With a series of ideas and beliefs we will evaluate which might be a better foundation for the future generations.
While the current social trends suggest that a person must be clever over kind; he/she should know when someone is taking advantage of the person. As much as I agree with this statement , I believe sometimes being kind over clever is also very important. History is filed with examples of such people, Mahatma Gandhi , who did his barrister in Africa when came to know about the oppression of the colonial rulers; left his stable well paying jobs , came back to India and fought for the people's rights. Had he been following those trends India might have been still under the rule of Britain. His ulterior motive and selflessness is still remembered by a lot of people.
A good balance of morality along with logical reasoning can lead a perfect blend required to help a person make justifiable decisions throughout his life. School , being an institution responsible for imparting moral and logical education , plays an important part shaping an overall person. Special class must be arranged everyday with students to instill a sense of judging 'right' and 'wrong' ; various topics and virtual situations can be introduced to the students which will help them shape their inner voice and make better decision at times when they come across situations like these.
Now, some might argue that , instead of such sessions an extra class of science or mathematics might help. Well, as much as academic development is important such holistic sessions are equally important since they prepare students for an outside world which demands more than just logical reasoning which needs responsible , kind and warm people who can take charge and lead this world into a different era with socially active people ready to help others in times of need ; sometimes even when logics doesn't say so.
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- Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns w 75
- Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns w 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0243902439 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47614877024 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.5327128298 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 5.21951772744 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248130212186 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843930730556 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732916130303 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145320056728 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914335770922 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.