Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
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Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
The education system of a society shapes its youngsters to be better citizens of tomorrow. The view that morality should be the foundation of an education system resonates with me and I would discuss the reasons which shape my view. Also, I would elaborate about how considering both teaching morality and logical reasoning, as cornerstone of education system would make the students better equipped to positively contribute towards the society.
A person is defined by the principles he holds and lives by. Instilling moral virtues in young students would go a long way in assisting them in overcoming complex situations, which cannot be tackled by relying solely on logical reasoning. There may be a few crucial decisions which may seem logically warranted yet would not be justifiable on moral grounds. For instance, a country may consider deployment of nuclear weaponry on civilians of another country as logical during wartime, but one should eschew from such a situation on moral grounds.
Holding one's moral grounds even in trying circumstances demands a lot of courage and is often the least treaded path. However, such principled individuals are the ones who can ameliorate a society. I acknowledge the importance of logical reasoning in our lives and do believe that it is an utmost important trait to succeed while making decisions in a business or for formulating strategy for the future of a nation. However, considering the golden words of Mahatma Gandhi, I am also of the opinion that means should justify the ends and one should consider whether a decision is morally correct or not, apart from being logically correct.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate the importance of morality in our society for its improvement. Further, I believe that we should strive to strike a balance between morality and logical reasoning in our lives.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, while, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12541254125 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84507591647 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.782159775 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323116170915 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108878813258 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836806677679 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194360942566 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643310104125 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, while, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12541254125 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84507591647 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.782159775 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323116170915 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108878813258 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836806677679 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194360942566 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643310104125 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.