Some people claim that you can tell whether a nation is great by looking at the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. Others argue that the surest indicator of a great nation is, in fact, the general welfare of all its people.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
There is always a debate about the exact indicators of measuring the greatness of nation. One might rightfully claim that it is the achievements of its ruler, artist or scientist while it is also true that welfare and proper status of people of a nation reflects its success as a great nation. However in my opinion there should be a balance between the two criteria stated above for a nation to be prominent and great.
Admittedly, anyone can assert that a nation is great because of its great artist, scientist, and the achievements of its ruler. But greatness is not something that can be described through some mere achievement rather it is a broad term that incorporates many aspects of people and society also. Only the greatness of some particular people is not sufficient to determine the virtue of greatness. For example, USSR, once communist nation full of academic and literary prodigies along with some great leaders in history had fallen apart because they were not able to meet the public demands and were hardly capable of maintain public welfare. Their atom bombs, gigantic warships, poets were unable to consolidate the nation as a whole. Therefore it should be maintain that only the achievements of some people hardly denote greatness.
Similarly, the overall welfare of all the citizens of a nation alone cannot define the greatness of a state. For instance, the Nordic countries, in terms of citizens’ welfare this countries are always on top. They always maintain the public demands accordingly and overall the citizens are happy with their country. However, this cannot define their greatness because they lack any political legacy that has a drastic effect on the world as a whole. There are no such examples which can tell us that this country has brought some revolutionary change in world politics or has induced a new way of life in the world, which are the components of determining greatness.
However, the combination of the above criteria must reflect the greatness of a nation. For instance, the USA, and UK, both the countries are both full of polymaths and prodigies in all spheres of knowledge. The countries are the home of numerous great scientists, artists, and politicians such as Newton, Picasso, and J.F Kennedy. While they landed on the moon, they also spread their political ideology all over the world. Thus influencing the world both in a political and scientific way. Their massive economy and prudent leadership of their ruler ensure the equity among the people of their country and there is hardly any discrimination among the people. Basically, these countries fully filled all the criteria of being great and, indeed, they are great.
To sum up, one of the mentioned criteria may present any country as good or better to live but any single of them alone surely is not sufficient to determine greatness rather it is the presence of both of the criteria that makes a nation great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
...reflects its success as a great nation. However in my opinion there should be a balance...
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...ates many aspects of people and society also. Only the greatness of some particular ...
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...For example, USSR, once communist nation full of academic and literary prodigies ...
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...e to consolidate the nation as a whole. Therefore it should be maintain that only the ach...
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...tion as a whole. Therefore it should be maintain that only the achievements of some peop...
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...ountries, in terms of citizens’ welfare this countries are always on top. They alway...
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...iticians such as Newton, Picasso, and J.F Kennedy. While they landed on the moon,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 492.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97357723577 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64802610822 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459349593496 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 770.4 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9871965779 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.227272727 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346502640347 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1101988913 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11019642755 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204932858168 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119788566328 0.0667264976115 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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