In this modern era, were people of our country have forgotten the culture and tradition. They were habituated to modern lifestyle and assume that the culture, which was followed prior, was outlandish. However, knowing our culture being in a country where people cannot leave without ethics and moral values is must. Therefore, when we look closer into the given argument, it is not sufficient to know only about what food people eat, how they prepare, or how they cultivate but should know how our moral culture works in every aspect.
Knowing about how people eat, what they eat does not define our culture. For instance, people who have studied masters in other foreign country might come to his own motherland and the food types he follows might have changed. This does not mean that the person have forgotten the culture or it does not mean that he have no understanding of our culture. Sometimes people need to adjust to their surroundings and behave according to that.
Our country has approximately 28 states were people of each state follow a different tradition of food type. For example, people of Andhra and Telangana would be preferred to eat rice. People of Rajasthan will mostly be eating chapatti and some other state people would like to eat combination of rice and tortilla. So based on the state, based on the people living and based on the culture they follow the food type changes and which does not mean that the people have no knowledge about culture. It is there climate, which decides which crop to grow more.
When we consider a scenario were people from one country migrate to other country for making money. In the condition they might not follow the culture where they have recently shifted instead they follow their own tradition and habits which is not appropriate to say that they are not respecting the country where they are living. We might sometime have a deep understanding of culture by knowing the food ways but having different food styles, followed by different people will be difficult to know the better understanding of our culture.
At the last, society who wants to have deep understanding of culture should consider every aspect, which involves food, clothing, language, ethical values. Simply studying food ways is not sufficient to have deep understanding of culture. To have knowledge about their culture one can also know from their prior generations, which helps them to understand them better.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
In this modern era, were people of our country have forgotten th...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...ow more. When we consider a scenario were people from one country migrate to othe...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98540145985 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46759955076 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450121654501 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9487826321 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.842105263 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289630938307 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104004150499 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702320125057 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185797884245 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228803143867 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
In this modern era, were people of our country have forgotten th...
^^^^
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...ow more. When we consider a scenario were people from one country migrate to othe...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98540145985 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46759955076 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450121654501 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9487826321 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.842105263 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289630938307 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104004150499 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702320125057 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185797884245 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228803143867 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.