The author proposes that the distinction of blompus, an extremely large carnivorous land mammal, which used to live in continent of Pentagoria for tens of thousands years. But was diminished some twelve thousand years ago might be due to the climate change and some other scholars theorized that the distinction was due to arrival of humans and also predation of humans in the place where mammals lived. However, when we look closer into the argument stated by the author is not sufficient to support the given statement. Although, many theories have contended about the extinction of the blompus animal there were no supporting proofs.
Primarily, the theories, which mentioned about the decline of blompus did not provide a explanation if the animal is cold blooded or warm blooded. Some animals, which are cold blooded and prefer to leave in countries like Antarctica or Iceland cannot leave in warm climate especially where the climate has more amount of humidity. Therefore, the author of the argument must have provided the proof of the climatic conditions were the mammals used to leave and started to decline.
Secondly, the author of the argument states that due to alterations in climate then plants and animals were reduced which effected blompus living. Nevertheless, the author mention about the animal stating that it was a carnivorous. The evidence provided by author seems in correct because animals who are carnivorous will not eat plants. Therefore, the must answer all the questions to justify the argument given and the author must have logically presented his view without assuming.
Thirdly, the theories also mentioned about the predation of human on blompus, which caused the decline of population of the mammals. The statement seems to be contradictory because both the climate change and human predation cannot happen; it might be any one condition, which had happened. In addition, there were no proofs that humans have attacked them because there might be any superior animals, which might have hunted them. The author have assumed about the decline of blompus without considering the key aspects.
Lastly, the hypothesis presented by the author is not sufficient to support and there are many questions that need to be answered to make the argument reasonable.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 369 350
No. of Characters: 1883 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.383 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.103 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.537 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 150 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.062 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.349 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 523, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ficient to support the given statement. Although, many theories have contended about the...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the decline of blompus did not provide a explanation if the animal is cold blood...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...on about the animal stating that it was a carnivorous. The evidence provided by author seems ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...an predation cannot happen; it might be any one condition, which had happened. In addit...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 369.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24390243902 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63700537407 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482384823848 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5420085955 57.8364921388 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.9375 119.503703932 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 23.324526521 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.70786347227 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181951200124 0.218282227539 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653850098845 0.0743258471296 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829751424619 0.0701772020484 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936472220883 0.128457276422 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981823506421 0.0628817314937 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.3799401198 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 98.500998004 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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