“Teacher’s salary should be based on their
student’s academic performance”
This statement suggests that teacher’s salary should decided on
the basis of student’s academic performance. This statement
seems to be very tempting because anyone would like to
implement this kind of thing in the Education system. However, I
would like to present some point of differences from my side.
Firstly, teacher’s salary cannot be decided on the basis of
academic performance of the students whom they teach. Even if
the teachers put their maximum effort to make the subject
understandable it may happen that due to some reason the
students could not give a better performance. In such case the
efforts made by the teacher cannot be neglected. For example, a
student worked very hard for his/her exams but due to some
reasons the student was not able to perform well in the exam.
Here there is no mistake of the student or the teacher. So, this
may be proven as injustice to the teacher who have given their
best effort in teaching.
Secondly, there is a strong possibility the teachers in order to get
a good salary will try to make the student study only the topic
which he/she will be asking in exam. In worst case a teacher may
try to leak the exam paper which is not ethical. This kind of
incident can endanger the key principle of education. Education is
given to the students for the betterment of one’s country and
social changes. Also, in some schools a certain subject is taught by
more than 1 teacher. In such cases it becomes difficult to know
that which teacher gave more or less efforts in making students
learn the subject. This may produce differences among the
teachers and they can try to show each other down for the sake
of good salary.
The third reason for my contrary thoughts with this statement is
that in certain schools there are rules that the intelligent students
will sit in one class and the weak students will sit in other class.
Here the problem is that a certain subject is taught by a same
teacher in both the class. So, by natural the performance of the
class with intelligent students will be undoubtedly better than the
class of weak students. So, in such case how to decide that the
teacher will get increment or decrement in their salary? Also,
teachers may try to pressurize the students in order to get a good
result followed by good salary. This may lead to mental
disturbance for some students.
This statement can be effective in some of the rural government
schools where the punctuality and the teaching pedagogy of
teachers are questioned. But again, there is a strong probability
that the government school teachers may contaminate the results
of their students and show very fine results and grades in order to
get a good salary. In such case the future of the students is
endangered and they are being denied the true education they
deserve.
In the final analysis, I would like to say that this kind of rule have a
higher chance of having more negative effects rather than
affirmative. So, this is a huge statement to be implemented in the
education system. So, there is a very high chance of this policy not
proving effective.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-12-30 | Yash S. Patel | 50 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rmance of the students whom they teach. Even if the teachers put their maximum effort ...
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Line 19, column 38, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'In the worst'.
Suggestion: In the worst
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Incident
...r which is not ethical. This kind of incident can endanger the key principle of educa...
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Line 26, column 33, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun efforts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...o know that which teacher gave more or less efforts in making students learn the s...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ts. This statement can be effective in some of the rural government schools where the pun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, well, for example, kind of, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2669.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 544.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90625 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61207931395 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413602941176 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 803.7 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3124752808 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3214285714 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 49.0 4.97078651685 986% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133152427487 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473860993682 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103525050408 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0349159124974 0.150359130593 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746809628247 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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