Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement mentions that students' academic performance should be the main factor for teachers' earnings. I mostly agree with this recommendation.
First of all, it is very important for students to have a good instructor because it can help students for deeper learning and for teachers for better teaching. For example, when a professor does not explain the concepts very well, students are going to struggle with that course for the whole semester or even drop the class. That is definitely not fair for students at all because students come to class to be more knowledgeable persons not to be left alone. Imagine a chemistry college professor who does not show good attitude when students show up for her office hours to ask her questions. In this case, students are either not able to pass the class or get good grades, so it is a good idea to predict educators' earnings based on students' evaluation.
In addition, communication between students and teachers is very important to improve academic learning and teaching, but sometimes teachers may be tired of repeating the same teaching courses over and over resulting in poor communication. It is possible that students will not feel welcomed to talk and discuss about different aspects of the course with their teachers. Thus, considering students' grades is a good way to make sure that there is good connection between professors and their students. It is obvious that good relationship will make improvement in education system.
On the contrary, some people may believe that instructors' incomes should not be based on students grades which can be true sometimes. For example, consider an instructor who only care about money, so he/she will make a class so easy to pass without any good understanding of the course for students. As a result, students will not learn the perception completely. It is necessary to make sure all students try their best to learn the course especially if the concept is already challenging to learn.
It is a good awareness to pay attention to students succeed to calculate teachers' salary; however, students' scores should not affect the whole amount of instructors' compensation. The reason is teachers need to make their lessons a little challenging to make sure that students study the course perfectly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 737, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... to predict educators earnings based on students evaluation. In addition, communicati...
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Line 2, column 758, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... earnings based on students evaluation. In addition, communication between stude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, in fact, as a result, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08465608466 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82490632446 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7860735893 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.058823529 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200294078527 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808448426467 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602403933909 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146024081408 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571438929501 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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