Teachers salaries should be based on their students academic performance Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address the most compelling r

Teachers’ salary can be considered as a token of appreciation of the hard work done by him/her for the entire academic year. This “hard work” includes teaching of course, but along with teaching it includes helping students, guiding students, making test papers for them so that they face the final exam situation with ease, giving them marks based on their performance so that they get a real-time analysis of their performance in exams and many much more. A teacher constantly thinks as to how he/she can improve his/her teaching ability or skills to enhance the performance of his/her students. In the real word, there are broadly two types of teacher’s viz. good teachers and bad teachers. Good teachers are those who perform all the duties/responsibilities mentioned above and a bad teacher is a one who does not perform more than one of these duties properly. So the claim that “Teachers’ salaries should be based on their students’ academic performance” cannot be considered as a universal truth. The terms “good” and “bad” are rather subjective terms so a teacher can be classified as a good or bad based on his/her past result. If suppose a majority of his/her students pass with more than 80% marks then he/she can be classified as a good teacher otherwise he/she is a bad teacher.

Owing to the fact that good teachers perform all their duties judiciously and their students pass the subject with more than 80%, there must be no compromise in giving salary to such teachers. The job of a teacher is a thankless job; they don’t expect students to thank them after getting good results and to some extent that is the truth. After getting the results, very few students talk to their teachers and thank them for the efforts put in by him/her which got him good marks. Instead, students ask their classmates about their marks and start comparing and gossiping about other students’ marks.

However, there are bad teachers in the market as well. Bad in the sense of bad results and not bad behavior. These teachers do not perform their duties well which leads to students getting poor grades. The students cannot be blamed for poor grades as no student would want a C grade on his/her transcript. It is teacher who didn’t teach well which cost them their marks in that subject. For these “bad” teachers, salaries should be given in proportion to the results of the students. If for more than one year this situation is happening, then the institution may have to take some strict actions against the teacher in question. Just taking cognizance of the matter won’t solve the purpose until some action is taken against him/her. If he/she is just let off giving a warning, it would be of no use as he/she would think he/she can do the same and escape off by receiving a warning.

Moreover, there are some circumstances where even “good” teachers’ students get bad results. In that case, the institute’s role comes into play. The institute must know the reason behind it. Maybe it is a pandemic year, where the education imparted to students via online mode was not a great success which led to a downfall in their grades. In such circumstances, the teachers fault is just infinitesimal and it’s just the conditions weren’t favorable to impart education. In my opinion, the salaries of such teachers under the given circumstances (given above is just an example) should not be cut as it was not their fault.

All in all, the claim can be regarded as partially correct. If the teacher is performing all the duties then he/she must be paid otherwise the institute needs to take some action against teachers whose results are not coming up to the mark. But if teachers having a good past record fail to deliver under some circumstances, they should be given the benefit of doubt without deducting their salaries.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, as to, of course, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 33.0505617978 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3216.0 2235.4752809 144% => OK
No of words: 656.0 442.535393258 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90243902439 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06087906887 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71786939061 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435975609756 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 939.6 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8598903341 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.741935484 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1612903226 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58064516129 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258650112356 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801666652377 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678601492485 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163647674452 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030611023692 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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