Technology makes lives comlicated
The topic raises the contraversial issue whether technology makes our life simple or complicated. Indisputably, one could say that technology yeilds more exposure to the society and helps people to reach their maximum potential. Nevertheless, it is always not true in that case, technology eventhough provide us with a lot of resources, it also makes our lives very complicated. Thus, I mostly agree with the prompt that technology eventhough aimed to makes our lives simple, it makes it more complicated and this claim will be supported by the two reasons below.
First of all, though, technology inventions are supposed to be as our tool, in reality, it has become our essential part of our lives. To an extent, technology has become our addiction. I would like to point out that, technology has created a lot of complications for the younger generations like anexity, depression and also it has spoiled their "social" life. To illustrate with an example, Blue Wale Challenge, one of the many victimes of technology. Basically, it is a game desinged to spoil and manipulate the player's mind and eventually, make the player kill himself. This game has costed us with many lives. Obviously, in this circumstance, it has proved that by-products of technology can affect our day to day lives. Consequently, it is pretty obvious that technology does more harm than good.
Furthermore, the boom of technology has lead us to complicate things that are otherwise very simple. Imagine the old times, when we had healthy planet with a good envirnonment. We never really had any trouble regarding Gobal Warming or Pollution. After technology made its acendency now we have to be very cautious about the health of our mother Earth. Increase in number of automobiles, deforestation, plants and plants of server farms which creates a lot of pollution and heat, Technology can be held in account for all of this.
Admittedly, one can argue that technology is the gift of our time. This could be true in some cases like medicine, education and communication but in most of the cases it has made our lives more complicated than by making it simple.
In conclution, even though some people believe that technology makes our lives simple with the support of my reasons above it can be said that technology in most of the cases fails to do so.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 453, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...mpt that technology eventhough aimed to makes our lives simple, it makes it more comp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, really, regarding, so, thus, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00511508951 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9753886983 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8905218972 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.85 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.55 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29795070675 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968224814126 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814509337651 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200923514168 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888629607359 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.