Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The past two decade has seen an unprecidented rise of technology that humanity has ever seen. From the development of simple but need application like cellular pones to robots and drones that can travell in space.Though, the rise of technology primarly aims at improving a persons state of living, it is undenaiable that it brings an whole array of complexity to the table.
To start with, the dawn of technology came the rise of social media. Social media though intially created to connect people accross the world has now evolved into an living and breathing enitiy dictating how peoples life , livelihood and social life plays out. To illustrate this clearly lets take an scenario that can be observed in social media, Lets say there are two people X and Y. X has an oppion which coinsides with the majority of the audience of the platform where has the Y person has dimetric view on the same topic which doesnt go along with the genreal audience. Though Y must be allowed to be entitled of his oppinion is still bastardized for is oppion to a point where his livelihood and personal life is affected. This example clearly shows how it is tough to naviugate through the social media which undoubtedly adds a layer of complexity to every persons life.
Despite the previous argument, people would counter argue that there are more development and economic growth seen in the last few decade due to rise of new technology. which though true, but at what cost ?. If losing basic human rights and decency is the what is reccuired to have a better economy and develepment then, we has humanity have not taken a step forward but a step backwards in the aspect of development. Technology should complement humannites social behaviours not help the tripple one another.
ergo, to reiterate , technology in sipte helping in making human life easier has bought with it a culture that brings forth more complication that we intially signed up for
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'decade' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'decades'.
Suggestion: decades
The past two decade has seen an unprecidented rise of techn...
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Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Though
...ts and drones that can travell in space.Though, the rise of technology primarly aims a...
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Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...iving, it is undenaiable that it brings an whole array of complexity to the table....
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... accross the world has now evolved into an living and breathing enitiy dictating h...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...athing enitiy dictating how peoples life , livelihood and social life plays out. T...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t. To illustrate this clearly lets take an scenario that can be observed in social...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s dimetric view on the same topic which doesnt go along with the genreal audience. Tho...
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Line 3, column 867, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...dly adds a layer of complexity to every persons life. Despite the previous argument,...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...w decade due to rise of new technology. which though true, but at what cost ?. If los...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...better economy and develepment then, we has humanity have not taken a step forward ...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...step forward but a step backwards in the aspect of development. Technology should...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ergo
...rs not help the tripple one another. ergo, to reiterate , technology in sipte hel...
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Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ipple one another. ergo, to reiterate , technology in sipte helping in making h...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plication that we intially signed up for
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86746987952 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63222993672 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569277108434 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.535481053 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.307692308 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107541114736 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404808366034 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324934234282 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661072395933 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315068077562 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.