Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Over the past few centuries, science and technology have advanced at an exponential rate. From something as basic as a lightbulb to a space shuttle orbiting the planet, science, technology, and the advancement of civilization have all been on display. Physical, mental, social, and economic challenges are brought on by the advancement of human civilization, but these issues can be solved in the present day with the aid of cutting-edge research and technology. Furthermore, I firmly believe that science and technology will undoubtedly provide solutions to all societal issues.
To put the aforementioned idea into perspective, let's use the example of an illness that we were able to treat using science and technology. About 200 years ago, millions of people perished from a simple common cold. When vaccines and antibiotics were developed, this changed. Another illustration is locomotion, which allows people to travel quickly to regions that would otherwise require days or even years to reach. This innovation ushers in a brand-new era of productivity and advancement.
Still, many would argue that a perfect society can’t be accomplished, which though is a valid argument can be a double edge sword as no thing or creature can achieve perfection and thus, we can only aim for close to perfection which science and technology will easily provide with.
ergo, we can conclude that though a perfect utopian society is hard to achieve, with science the probability is never zero.
- Technology while apparently aimed to simplify our lives only makes our lives more complicated Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develo 50
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your pos 33
- Technology while apparently aimed to simplify our lives only makes our lives more complicated Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develo 50
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your pos 33
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your pos 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nothing'?
Suggestion: nothing
... argument can be a double edge sword as no thing or creature can achieve perfection and ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ergo
...d technology will easily provide with. ergo, we can conclude that though a perfect ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 237.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29113924051 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01564106728 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649789029536 0.4932671777 132% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2323538903 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158770424994 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477394033903 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423648633316 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855483244127 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402232551116 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.