Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Technology has greatly improved our lifestyle, ranging from efficient travelling techniques to communication. Internet is one of the best examples when it comes to how convenient our life has become due to the aid of technology, making access to data so efficient from anywhere in the world. Mortality rates have gone down due to the advancement in technology, there are cure for diseases which were previously deemed as fatal. Technology has given us the power of focusing on more complex problems by taking care of the relatively simple, perfunctory tasks in our daily lives.
The improvement of technology has greatly improved the way we communicate. A century earlier we relied mostly on postal communication, which was handwritten and had a very low chance of the communication getting through. Introduction of email and telephones have greatly improved these chances, within a fraction of a second you can get in touch with anyone in the world no matter how far they stay. The feature of video calling which leverages high-speed internet connection has made our world much smaller bringing everyone so close to each other.
Due to the advancement in technology travelling from one place to another has been made so efficient that travelling thousands of miles takes us barely a few hours, which our ancestors would have taken months to cover. Travelling now via airplanes are not only time efficient but also safe, unlike travelling via ships which were highly inconvenient and accident-prone leading to a great number of people losing their lives.
Access to data has been made so much easier, the introduction of cloud computing has made access to our personal data a few clicks away from anywhere. Terabytes and gigabytes of data is made available over the internet, which is so convenient because all you need is a computer and internet to access it, may it be any part of the world.
Although technology has made are life much simpler, there are still a few drawbacks which in turn lead to further complicating our lives. For example data stored in cloud, if a hacker is able to hack into your account, he can access your private data which can have a very detrimental effect like, impersonation by using your personal identification documents that might have been stored there and could use it for illegal activities. So additional steps are needed to secure your data, like setting up a difficult password and updating it quarterly so that hacking becomes not very easy, thus complicating our lives.
Thus it is safe to say that technology in many ways has simplified our lives to an extent where technology can help us get rid of the mundane tasks and focus on the more complicated problems in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 372, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'cures'?
Suggestion: cures
...he advancement in technology, there are cure for diseases which were previously deem...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...y easy, thus complicating our lives. Thus it is safe to say that technology in ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, still, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2274.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9978021978 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8400707193 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6976882793 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.125 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4375 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167988738698 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603406559527 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520467278322 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928520632762 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598832360946 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.