There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts—especially at a great cost in money and jobs—to save endangered animal or plant species.
(Wrire a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain the reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these reasons shape your position.)
Whether we should not save endangered animal or plant species could be discussed in many facets. However, saving these species, even though it requires a lot of money and jobs, can benefit to human beings.
First of all, the extinction of one particular species can lead to a food shortage for us. Inside an ecosystem, there are many food chains and the interactions between creatures are complicated. Not only is an extinction of a species no longer a part of the ecosystem, but also a predator that loses one of its preys will die. As a result, the chain reaction will destroy the whole ecosystem and people who rely on it will suffer the deficiency of food eventually.
Secondly, these species might be the key for humans to live longer and healthier. Nowadays, there are still some illnesses, such as AIDS, some chronic diseases and cancers, that cannot be cured effectively. And as a technology progresses, scientists will be able to discover a particular ingredient from a specific species and use it create a new treatment to against those illnesses. Smallpox used to be the disease which could never be treated in mid century, whereas it can hardly threaten our life in this generation. Thus, we must do everything we can to protect these endangered creatures from extinction.
Admittedly, spending thousands and thousands money on saving animals or plants will freak people out. However, if we just walk away and do nothing to it, we might not be able to cure those illness and those patients will have nothing but suffer once they are sick. Not to mention a great number of people will be wiped out because of the food shortage generated by ecosystem crushing down. Hence, thinking of saving these creatures as saving ourselves, is the money much more valuable than human lives?
In sum, it is reasonable for society to make extraordinary efforts to save endangered species. Otherwise, many people will suffer from a food shortage and illnesses that will eventually cause the extinction of humanity.
- The following appeared in an editorial in a business magazine. "Although the sales of Whirlwind video games have declined over the past two years, a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed. The survey ask 82
- It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing a 50
- It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. 50
- There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts—especially at a great cost in money and jobs—to save endangered animal or plant species.(Wrire a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the s 50
- There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts—especially at a great cost in money and jobs—to save endangered animal or plant species.(Wrire a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the s 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...ient from a specific species and use it create a new treatment to against those illnes...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this illness' or 'those illnesses'?
Suggestion: this illness; those illnesses
...ing to it, we might not be able to cure those illness and those patients will have nothing bu...
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Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r of people will be wiped out because of the food shortage generated by ecosystem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, whereas, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97050147493 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72305101509 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554572271386 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5307671096 60.3974514979 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.1176470588 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12241632339 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494858731226 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758938241259 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08721948804 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060442806201 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.