Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
People generally crticize what they don't understand or what they think is impossible to do. They think, if I can't do it then nobody can. Even if someone is trying hard to do it, instead of motivating him they will criticize that person for thinking of impossible. However, It takes quite a vision and will power to go against the tide and achieve your goal. The people who do that leave a legacy behind them.
For instance, Steve Jobs, The genius and the maverick. He had a vision for his company. That vision was to built a perfect product. When they were building iphone or imac, there was this huge decision, that either we should go for third party software or create our own OS. Everybody in the company was open towards third party software because it would save comapny a lot of cost and time. But, as maverik he is, he believed that a third party software would cause many problems in the devices. There could the issues of securirty, peformance etc. Hence, he stuck to his vision. And now he has acheived his vision. Making apple a perfect company. If, he had accepted the decision to go for third party software, just because people were criticizing him. Apple would have reached great heights. And now everybody revere him and his company.
Consider the example of galileo, he was so much criticized by the church for his theory regarding earth. Since, he said earth is not the center but, it is planet revolving around sun. Everybody thought it is a blasphemy. But he didn't back down and proved his theory right. Now everybody know galilo for his great contribution to the science.
When everybody is against you, you feel in a state of despair. It is your believe, your vision and your hardwork that can take you through all that critcism. If your vision is not strong enough you will fall prey to the criticism and end up failing in your mind right in the middle of your journey and may not achieve your object
I think it is your sheer hardwork and belief in yourself that takes you from normal to a expert. As they say genius in 1 percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'as to', 'for instance', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223277909739 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.16864608076 0.157235817809 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0451306413302 0.0880659088768 51% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0451306413302 0.0497285424764 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.125890736342 0.0444667217837 283% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0950118764846 0.12292977631 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0285035629454 0.0406280797675 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35645603717 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021377672209 0.030933414821 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00237529691211 0.0016655270985 143% => OK
Determiners: 0.0688836104513 0.0997080785238 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0261282660333 0.0249443105267 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166270783848 0.0148568991511 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2105.0 2732.02544248 77% => OK
No of words: 377.0 452.878318584 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58355437666 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315649867374 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.206896551724 0.280924506359 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.140583554377 0.200843997647 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0716180371353 0.132149295362 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35645603717 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 219.290929204 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543766578249 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 60.6812608777 55.4138127331 110% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.962962963 23.380412469 60% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4713895231 59.4972553346 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.962962963 141.124799967 55% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.962962963 23.380412469 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.674092028746 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 34.6526181354 51.4728631049 67% => OK
Elegance: 1.02097902098 1.64882698954 62% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124679728122 0.391690518653 32% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107202497592 0.123202303941 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110756535498 0.077325440228 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.425494686842 0.547984918172 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15787374765 0.149214159877 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390468237875 0.161403998019 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042818562317 0.0892212321368 48% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.247436947763 0.385218514788 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0739993263047 0.0692045440612 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711051618479 0.275328986314 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03379289671 0.0653680567796 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.