Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Modern world demands a strong personality in every individual. Some people believe that people who go throught their decision regardless of the people's opinion are likely to make more impact while some people believe otherwise. This essay will discuss this in detail and put forward reasons as to why people who see their ideas through ignoring doubts of others are tend to leave a lasting legacy.
There have been many example of leaders and reformers who went against the grain to bring about a change. When someone puts up a fight against a widespread problem that has been deemed 'normal' by population they are often subjected to the criticism. For example when Martin Luther King started the movement for civil rights many believed it will fail, some even opposed it. If Martin Luther King had stopped his movement after the initial difficulties it would have put societiy on a backward journey. Its human nature to show resistance to change even if its a positive change. Hence leaders who stick to their philosophy are the leaders who mark their era in history.
Furthermore, on personal level it is clear that you are the only person who knows yourself better than anyone else that means you are the person who knows what best for yourself. Often people follow a normal, beaten path that leads to a normal life. Fear of public opinion and lack of self confidance prevents people from doing right thing. A concept ,A plan that will make you best version of yourself should never be shelved because others dont believe in it. Those who dare often become successful. Elon Musk started investing in electric vehicle when Ford motors was rejecting the ideas for such technology. It was a common opnion that Elon Musk's investment is frugal course of action yet that plan made him a pioneer in new industry that dominates current market. Self confidence and ability to tune out noise are the key factors of every success story.
One might argue that what if it goes wrong and that argument holds some water but rejecting ideas beacuse of that is foolish. Life is unpredictable and self instincts are a measure to deal with that. In conclusion, a person that goes through their plan completley regardless of public opnion is more likely to make major impact n human history and have a long lasting legacy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...rought their decision regardless of the peoples opinion are likely to make more impact ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...s through ignoring doubts of others are tend to leave a lasting legacy. There h...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'many examples'.
Suggestion: many examples
... a lasting legacy. There have been many example of leaders and reformers who went again...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...inst the grain to bring about a change. When someone puts up a fight against a wides...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, as for, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85858585859 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35175182779 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.730215202 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249233173785 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614307464695 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937328962211 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144813244838 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741695591711 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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