It is not mandatory that the subject that the student is studying will make his career only on that, choice and the situation may vary further, however according to the prompt, undergraduate studentst who are majoring in Bussiness or in Science should not be take any courses in the humanities. In my opinion I disagree with this upto some extant and advocate that they should also explore other areas too.
At the very outset, our job sector is diverse, there are many types of jobs available and it is also not necessary that if a person is studying some other subject can not do any other job. For instance, A student is studied bussiness but further if he thought that he is not liking the bussiness and he want to makeshift his career which is closely related to Humanities background, in this case if he had studied any subject related to the humanties in his college it will definitely benifit him, so if a student study othere subject apart from his major it may play very crucial role in future, and by evoking this it may reduce the opportunity the student may get in near future.
On the other hand, there are many courses in science and Bussiness and they are largely related with our history, and the history is the subject from the Humanities group, so if any students want to know more about some topic, how they have established, studying this type some subject may be a great help, for instance, Bussines in the ancient time was different from now, there are many thing which has from the past which has teaches us some important rules of bussiness and those are the root of what we are doing now, so if a student from the Bussiness background has that root knowledge then there might be a possibility that he can get benifited from that.
On the contrary, it is true that in major there are already a lots of courses to study, and having something extra maybe a huge burden for the students, and there are also some specilized field that require enormous effort in the majors. For instance an engineering students require more then 45 courses to complete in order to acheive his degree and with these amount of courses having some more can be a real burdn for them, and on and off this type of specilized degree may not require to study some other subjects that is out of scope, but having those knowlege can plays a role maybe not actively but passively in career.
In conclusion, our career choice is multifaceted, some of the student wants to do bussines after completing the engineering and some the student latter take a great interest in the sceince after completing the Humanities, we can take example of Lionardo Da Vinci, he is the man, who not only contributed in science but also had some amaxing impact on the Humanities, Though having a different field subject may benifit some and some may feel burden, but in my opinion I support that Businees and science majoring student should have an options to take a courses from the Humanities.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y should also explore other areas too. At the very outset, our job sector is di...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...iness but further if he thought that he is not liking the bussiness and he want to makeshift ...
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Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...t he is not liking the bussiness and he want to makeshift his career which is closel...
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Line 2, column 590, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...his major it may play very crucial role in future, and by evoking this it may reduce the ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty the student may get in near future. On the other hand, there are many course...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
... time was different from now, there are many thing which has from the past which has teach...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
... was different from now, there are many thing which has from the past which has teach...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y that he can get benifited from that. On the contrary, it is true that in majo...
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Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...is true that in major there are already a lots of courses to study, and having someth...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat in major there are already a lots of courses to study, and having something e...
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ce an engineering students require more then 45 courses to complete in order to ache...
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Line 4, column 494, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
...pe of specilized degree may not require to study some other subjects that is out of scop...
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Line 4, column 575, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'play'
Suggestion: play
...of scope, but having those knowlege can plays a role maybe not actively but passively...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not actively but passively in career. In conclusion, our career choice is mult...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ion, our career choice is multifaceted, some of the student wants to do bussines after comp...
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Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an option' or simply 'options'?
Suggestion: an option; options
...nd science majoring student should have an options to take a courses from the Humanities. ...
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Line 5, column 557, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a course' or simply 'courses'?
Suggestion: a course; courses
... student should have an options to take a courses from the Humanities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion, it is true, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 529.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62570888469 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46665289111 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415879017013 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 794.7 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 23.0359550562 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 183.592577124 60.3974514979 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 305.875 118.986275619 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.125 23.4991977007 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.875 5.21951772744 381% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225813756184 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116116103999 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078458901555 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149673255795 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557488508209 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 14.1392134831 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.95 48.8420337079 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 12.1743820225 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.4 11.2143820225 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y should also explore other areas too. At the very outset, our job sector is di...
^^^^
Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...iness but further if he thought that he is not liking the bussiness and he want to makeshift ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...t he is not liking the bussiness and he want to makeshift his career which is closel...
^^^^
Line 2, column 590, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...his major it may play very crucial role in future, and by evoking this it may reduce the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty the student may get in near future. On the other hand, there are many course...
^^^^
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
... time was different from now, there are many thing which has from the past which has teach...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
... was different from now, there are many thing which has from the past which has teach...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y that he can get benifited from that. On the contrary, it is true that in majo...
^^^^
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...is true that in major there are already a lots of courses to study, and having someth...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat in major there are already a lots of courses to study, and having something e...
^^
Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ce an engineering students require more then 45 courses to complete in order to ache...
^^^^
Line 4, column 494, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
...pe of specilized degree may not require to study some other subjects that is out of scop...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 575, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'play'
Suggestion: play
...of scope, but having those knowlege can plays a role maybe not actively but passively...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not actively but passively in career. In conclusion, our career choice is mult...
^^^^
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ion, our career choice is multifaceted, some of the student wants to do bussines after comp...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an option' or simply 'options'?
Suggestion: an option; options
...nd science majoring student should have an options to take a courses from the Humanities. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 557, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a course' or simply 'courses'?
Suggestion: a course; courses
... student should have an options to take a courses from the Humanities.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion, it is true, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2447.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 529.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62570888469 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46665289111 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415879017013 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 794.7 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 23.0359550562 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 183.592577124 60.3974514979 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 305.875 118.986275619 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.125 23.4991977007 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.875 5.21951772744 381% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225813756184 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116116103999 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078458901555 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149673255795 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557488508209 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.4 14.1392134831 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.95 48.8420337079 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 12.1743820225 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.4 11.2143820225 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.